'Potion Commotion' [Alex Russo/Justin Russo]

Feb 21, 2009 03:43

Title: 'Potion Commotion'
Author: that_1_incident
Fandom: Wizards of Waverly Place
Rating: R
Warnings: Het, incest, profanity, sexual themes
Pairing: Alex Russo/Justin Russo
Word Count: ~4,300
Summary: A love potion meant for Alex's crush gets into the hands of her brother.
Disclaimer: "Wizards of Waverly Place" is on the Disney Channel, for crying out loud. Do ( Read more... )

het, wowp: alex/justin

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liquidlights February 21 2009, 16:35:08 UTC
:( The end was so sad! But this was amazing just like all your Jalex one-shots. I've wanted to see this episode re-created for quite some time now and finally someone who can actually write well has done it! Yay!

I like how even though it erased their memories he still felt like there was more too it and he recognized that the feeling went deeper than just what the potion was able to give them. You've got Justin and Alex's characters down to a T.

So yeah.. love love loved it and can't wait to read more from you! =)

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that_1_incident February 21 2009, 21:16:13 UTC
I've wanted to see this episode re-created for quite some time now and finally someone who can actually write well has done it!

Thanks so much <3 I'm really excited that you liked this.

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sandalaris February 22 2009, 04:36:29 UTC
The ending was so sad. Beautiful and sad. It's wonderful, you have such a grasp on the characters, and you did so well, once again. Can't wait for more. XD

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that_1_incident February 22 2009, 08:26:12 UTC
Yeah, I'm incapable of writing happily-ever-after Jalex, apparently. Thank you so much, as always <3

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I lovethis show but your fictions are way better hppyflwr February 23 2009, 21:11:31 UTC
OMG this is the first fiction I have read of this fandom and you have turn me into a junkie by now. It is so good I cannot believe my eyes so sweet and sad at the same time. you are really good and I lok forward to reading more from you.

hppyflwr

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Re: I lovethis show but your fictions are way better that_1_incident February 24 2009, 06:04:13 UTC
Thank you so much! I have a couple of other shorter WoWP fics that you can find here and I look forward to writing more in the future =)

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shorefadingaway February 25 2009, 05:35:15 UTC
Looooooved this! This was definetly the best re-write of this episode I've read. Bravo!

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that_1_incident February 25 2009, 06:22:35 UTC
Thank you so much! It's such an epic episode to rewrite, I think.

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prophetic February 28 2009, 00:07:52 UTC
This is so nice! I love the wistful, sad ending. It's perfect.

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that_1_incident March 1 2009, 03:35:01 UTC
Thank you so much <3 Yeah, there was really no way for there to be a happy ending but I didn't want it to be soul-crushing either. That's where a memory loss spell comes in useful \o/ I wish such a thing was an option in real life.

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