regrettably yours.
ryo will never write you love letters
johnny's entertainment.
ryo/ueda. 788 words.
a/n- for the ryoda fans on my f-list. (: ♥
as;lfsfkd so uninspired these days. just something I wrote quickly, and a kind of experimental style :/
highlight for answers.
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and you swear, his eyes can shatter the moon. )
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YES. I WILL SLEEP NOW. (:
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This is. GREAT. I LOVE the style sggllkhtlikru I can't even begin to explain how amazing it is.
This is going straight into my memories~
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asfkjlasf;l thank you for the memory add! (:
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(you wish you were right.)
WOW thats deep
and i like how you have the highlight for the answers ... just makes you wonder
this is amazing writing ... i usually dont read fics at all but this is awesomely written, good job
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Uh. I try to be deep. It usually fails. o:
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ahhh!...but i do have some concrit....i don't think it's necessary to make us highlight for the other text because it's just kind of annoying for me. And using parenthesis works just fine on it's own without making the text invisible because the parenthesis already implies that the text is well...it's just other information that doesn't necessarily need to be added but added because you wanted us to read it =X...aish...i don't make sense..
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... explains why i write it all the time. :/
xDDD but the point of the text was the invisibleness because i wanted to create layers, if you know what i mean. But thanks for telling me that. (:
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