[oneshot] regrettably yours.

Jun 26, 2008 01:44

regrettably yours.
ryo will never write you love letters
johnny's entertainment.
ryo/ueda. 788 words.

a/n- for the ryoda fans on my f-list. (: ♥
as;lfsfkd so uninspired these days. just something I wrote quickly, and a kind of experimental style :/

highlight for answers.

and you swear, his eyes can shatter the moon. )

fandom: je, oneshot, pairing: nishikido ryo/ueda tatsuya

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tharae June 25 2008, 16:54:38 UTC
hi! i love you too, and also that icon. i love that icon a lot. ♥

YES. I WILL SLEEP NOW. (:

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tsuyonshi June 25 2008, 16:41:19 UTC
WOAH. O____O
This is. GREAT. I LOVE the style sggllkhtlikru I can't even begin to explain how amazing it is.
This is going straight into my memories~

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tharae June 25 2008, 16:55:57 UTC
Thank you! I was really nervous about this, idk why. Trying out new styles always freaks me out. o:

asfkjlasf;l thank you for the memory add! (:

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silver881 June 25 2008, 17:13:50 UTC
you have self inflicted pain scrawled into your skin and you spell it out for him (i-l-o-v-e-y-o-u) slowly, steadily, scribing it carefully onto his wrist, wondering if the words would seep into his soul &hisheart. you write your love letters in red ink because you don’t know how to speak in happy endings and your confession to him is slightly cliché, the words you speak are almost painful but somehow you think that this is the beginning, only the beginning.
(you wish you were right.)

WOW thats deep

and i like how you have the highlight for the answers ... just makes you wonder

this is amazing writing ... i usually dont read fics at all but this is awesomely written, good job

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tharae June 26 2008, 06:38:37 UTC
Thank you for reading~

Uh. I try to be deep. It usually fails. o:

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s7nluv June 25 2008, 17:30:11 UTC
i like it =D...because i like angst and this definitely leaves an impression because...i don't know...it just does...it's the way you wrote it. The run-on sentences that create and effect where it's...desperate or something. *fails*...i just woke up =_=...sorry...

ahhh!...but i do have some concrit....i don't think it's necessary to make us highlight for the other text because it's just kind of annoying for me. And using parenthesis works just fine on it's own without making the text invisible because the parenthesis already implies that the text is well...it's just other information that doesn't necessarily need to be added but added because you wanted us to read it =X...aish...i don't make sense..

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tharae June 26 2008, 06:39:53 UTC
salkjfa I like angst too!
... explains why i write it all the time. :/

xDDD but the point of the text was the invisibleness because i wanted to create layers, if you know what i mean. But thanks for telling me that. (:

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haaaana June 25 2008, 17:33:23 UTC
Wow, this is a new kind of writing style! I really like it~! ^___^

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tharae June 26 2008, 06:40:27 UTC
I'm glad you do, because i was so nervous about it, omg. aksjfas (:

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