Title: name it. Author: thankyouandyou Rating: G Pairing: Jonghyun/Taemin Note: What’s going on in my head, these days. Summary: You still don’t know what this is.
It’s bones meet teeth, skinny kid meets singing moron with an ego to power up a small city. It’s the worst idea you ever had, it’s such fun. This thing born from easy amusement and never being told no as a kid, and of course, let’s face it, we’re hot and I like your mouth when you grin at me.
Perfect imperfection, and that is way better than plain perfect-ness.
And for some reason, I actually cried at these lines: Remember how I put my boots down on the linoleum, the sun so bright on us it was almost turning you white I am weird. I can't even explain why it moves me so much. But that must be the great thing abour this, you just read - and feel.
I know what Name It... is the anagram of. But then again, I see his name in everything. It still amazes me
I hate that I liked this. It was so fun to read but stuff that's written this way...this frantic first person second person stuff and everything's a metaphor or idek how to explain this...usually this style has a tendency to read pretentious but I guess I like pretentious XD
Regardless of my assumptions on this writing style you still pulled out a really good fic. I commend you ^^b
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It’s bones meet teeth, skinny kid meets singing moron with an ego to power up a small city. It’s the worst idea you ever had, it’s such fun. This thing born from easy amusement and never being told no as a kid, and of course, let’s face it, we’re hot and I like your mouth when you grin at me.
Perfect imperfection, and that is way better than plain perfect-ness.
And for some reason, I actually cried at these lines:
Remember how I put my boots down on the linoleum, the sun so bright on us it was almost turning you white
I am weird. I can't even explain why it moves me so much. But that must be the great thing abour this, you just read - and feel.
I know what Name It... is the anagram of. But then again, I see his name in everything. It still amazes me
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Regardless of my assumptions on this writing style you still pulled out a really good fic. I commend you ^^b
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I just want to drizzle it over ice cream and eat it all up.
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