Dec 15, 2006 19:27
It's not very good as far as rhyming goes, but as for meaning and depth, it's just what it needs to be. See if you can figure out it's meaning, not that it's hard to do. It's title is "Rebirth". Here goes!
Sobbing...
Crying...
Choking...
"Silence, child"!
Rising...
Stumbling...
...Fallen...
"You are NOTHING!
Stay down"!
Sobbing...
Choking...
RISING!
Stumbling...
Crawling...
"Stay DOWN"!
NO!
Fighting back...
Stumbling...
Crawling...
Limping...
"You can't do it"!
...I can't quit...
Crawling...
Limping...
WALKING!
Your taunts mean nothing now...
I know who I am...
I see what I want...
It is mine, now...
It is yours no longer...
Walking...
Running...
Laughing...
I'm...
...walking...
...running
...laughing...
I'm...
ALIVE!