More song

[thaichicken]

So, I was re-reading my journal, and I came across this post, and I remembered that I had come up with a little more of the song. Suggestions and comments still very welcome! I want it to have an ending, but there isn't one yet. Also I haven't decided if the ending should be happy or sad, but I guess that can come when there actually is one... :)

Touch me gently
Hold me tight
I need to know you're
here tonight

Whisper in my ear
Let me hear
you say I love you
say I love you
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Kiss me softly
Take my hand
You're slipping from me
like grains of sand

____________
______________
__ I love you
__ I love you