Sticky Response Pt 3

[mmouse15]

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Re: FIC: Prime - Open Circle - Optimus/Autobots - virgin priests/deflowering, voyeurism, sticky - pt

[swindleslog]

I am really, really impressed by your world building on this one. It would have been easy to make this a quick, easy fic, skipping straight to the porn, but you're not here to write porn, are you? You're here to write a story.

You've gotten this vast system in place already, with the creepiness of the first trial, quelled by the appearance of the hexapod, (which I really liked as a critter, btw), you've got this secluded sanctuary, a variety of people, and interesting takes on characters, while keeping them as the same people. Skyfire being trapped, but a still peacefull and content, and self-sacrificing for all that, is a really good example of it. Trapped in ice, trapped in time, and now trapped in a room. I wonder if he's allowed out when the Prime has been found, the anchor pulled up when the ship has sailed?

The younger nuns were the only real tip of the hat to the main requested kink- still young enough to be titillated, and to be willing victim to their own inexperience and hormones, as well as their impulses. Nice to see that remaining under a vow of chastity hasn't made anyone a prude too- Ratchet offering to reapply those bits of armour made me google what they were. Naughty!

I eagerly await whatever you do next.

Re: FIC: Prime - Open Circle - Optimus/Autobots - virgin priests/deflowering, voyeurism, sticky - pt

[swindleslog]

Wow! Thank you so much! I'm really enjoying myself writing this, so I guess that shows.

The first trial was Inanna and Ereshkigal, right down to being pinned to the wall. Once that idea cropped up I really liked it and the details built themselves around that.

Second trial...not so fancy, but again, the prompt suggested things.

I toyed around initially with having Silverbolt be the Anchor, but Skyfire, as you say, made so much sense I kept him there.

Naming robot bits after real components of medieval armor is so much fun! *cackles madly* Oh, la, sir knight, mayest I help thee with thy faulds? Truly it would take but a moment...

Unless RL trips me up, next section should go up in a few days. :)