REQ: G1, Prowl/Jazz, Smokescreen, gambling, loosing bets, slaves, guilt
anonymous
May 28 2014, 15:54:02 UTC
This is the reason why Prowl hates gambling.
In short, Prowl's brother, Smokescreen decides to try and loosen up his very serious and very quiet brother. What better way than to take him gambling? Not that Prowl's enthusiastic about the idea, but he had promised Smokescreen a night out with him. Plus, what better way to keep him in check and save him from loosing money if Prowl was there with him? Smokescreen will win or loose a couple of credits, Prowl will humor him, the end. Now see, Prowl was presently 'engaged' (or the cybertronian version of the promise to bond to someone) to Jazz. And as such, they have exchanged their creation certificates (or whatever documents they need to be legal citizens) - it's their version of an "engagement ring". So, back to the gambling part - Prowl looses sight of Smokescreen for a moment, but it's already too late. Smokescreen had lost quite the sum, along with his apartment. And since both of them had nothing of equal value, Smokey asks Prowl to bet Jazz's certificate so they can win their savings back. Prowl flat out refuses but knows his brother will go to jail, so he reluctantly agrees, calculating the more likely way he could win. And so he places the bet. And looses to his horror. (he looses due to cheating, or just bad luck, or miscalculation, the point it - he looses) Jazz is livid. He has no choice. He has to be taken, to be the property of someone else. Neither Prowl nor Smokescreen can come up with the money to buy Jazz back, so in the end Jazz gets sold to a house in Praxus. So Prowl does the only thing he can - applies to be a servant to that House, so he can watch over Jazz (who is still pissed/offended/hurt that Prowl would gamble something so important), while Smokescreen is trying to get the needed money to buy Jazz back. There is a difference between Prowl's and Jazz's status. Prowl is a servant, an employee, and has legal rights. Jazz doesn't, basically making him a slave or worse.
So yeah, I want Prowl trying to regain Jazz's trust back in him, apologizing and trying the make the whole situation better, trying to protect Jazz from the abuse of the house (and the author can decide what form of abuse they want, be that beating or rape or some other form of hurting -- all up to you), and at the same time hoping Smokescreen gets the needed credits soon (which are a lot) to get Jazz out of there.
Do want: Courting - Prowl has to start from the very beginning, to regain Jazz's trust and prove to him he still loves him. Protective Prowl. Gentle facing between the two, esp on Prowl's part, trying to make it up to Jazz. Hurt/comfort action. Guilty Prowl & Smokescreen.
Re: REQ: G1, Prowl/Jazz, Smokescreen, gambling, loosing bets, slaves, guilt
anonymous
May 29 2014, 12:58:59 UTC
*laughs* Yes! All sorts of slag happen :D And Prowl has to watch it all, knowing it's HIS fault that Jazz is having those nightmares, suffering like this! *purr*
Re: REQ: G1, Prowl/Jazz, Smokescreen, gambling, loosing bets, slaves, guilt
anonymous
May 29 2014, 16:37:28 UTC
And now I'm so imagining Jazz being tossed around the house and sometimes given as a reward to the good servants for them to do whatever they please to him that night... *shivers* *drools* Yes, yes, yes, someone please fill this (or drabble if you already have a request to fill)!
Re: REQ: G1, Prowl/Jazz, Smokescreen, gambling, loosing bets, slaves, guilt
anonymous
May 29 2014, 17:39:40 UTC
... Jazz as a reward? You just triggered an idea :D What if really that is a way to 'reward' good and exceptional servants? Prowl is usually 'perfect' in anything he does, including being a servant, but perhaps this time he strives not only to be perfect, but THE best servant, so that by giving him Jazz as a reward that way he can at least protect Jazz? :D
Re: REQ: G1, Prowl/Jazz, Smokescreen, gambling, loosing bets, slaves, guilt
anonymous
May 29 2014, 19:33:33 UTC
A thousand times YES! And if being the best servant means doing less than moral things to earn Jazz, Prowl is by all means willing to do anything. If that includes interfacing with the head of the house he's serving in (while Jazz, bound and gagged, watches), so be it as long as Jazz is given to him. After all, Prowl's also got to prove his worth in the berth to be worthy of having Jazz, right? ^_^
And because slaves of the house know they have tracking chips implanted in them, when Prowl suggests running away if Jazz's masters won't sell Jazz, Jazz denies the idea for reasons mentioned previously. Also, slave coding forced into slaves that don't behave right away? Not sure if Jazz would behave or not.
Re: REQ: G1, Prowl/Jazz, Smokescreen, gambling, loosing bets, slaves, guilt
anonymous
May 29 2014, 19:54:52 UTC
Sure, that sounds hot, but I think we're getting strayed from the prompt here. The main thing is the guilt that both Prowl and Smokey feel, and Jazz's suffering is just making them feel even worse. The thing that really should be shown here is how Prowl is attempting to fix this, to try and make to collateral damage minimal. So yeah, the slave part is important, but not the leading role the fic should center about, cuz then it's a whole new prompt XD But go ahead anon, write! I would love to see what you'll make of this prompt ^^
Re: REQ: G1, Prowl/Jazz, Smokescreen, gambling, loosing bets, slaves, guilt
anonymous
May 29 2014, 20:00:23 UTC
Sorry, my mind gets ahead of me most of the time. *sheepish grin* Thanks to you, I might drabble in this! :D (Or I might ask a friend if she'd like to write with me... but don't get your hopes up too much.)
Re: REQ: G1, Prowl/Jazz, Smokescreen, gambling, loosing bets, slaves, guilt
anonymous
May 29 2014, 20:27:27 UTC
(New voice)
You could always work that into the idea. Prowl justifies everything he does as necessary to protect Jazz but Jazz is creeped out by how different Prowl seems now which could lead to more guilt?
Re: REQ: G1, Prowl/Jazz, Smokescreen, gambling, loosing bets, slaves, guilt
anonymous
May 29 2014, 20:53:55 UTC
I'm seeing Jazz staying in Prowl's quarters after being gifted, and since Jazz might seem somewhat scared of him, Prowl sleeps on the floor while he has Jazz stay on the berth. After a while longer, Jazz starts getting nightmares in recharge, the effects of which keeps Prowl awake and miserable at night...
Re: REQ: G1, Prowl/Jazz, Smokescreen, gambling, loosing bets, slaves, guilt
anonymous
May 29 2014, 21:45:07 UTC
I find this very interesting because Prowl and Jazz were "engaged" to each other (which in a way is why Jazz is in that situation). Why would Jazz be scared from Prowl? Pissed and angry and hurt - yes - which is reason enough for Prowl to sleep on the floor. XD And oh yes, the nightmares is such a wonderful touch to all of this. Hmmm, but when I think about it, you are right in a way; Jazz can be scared of Prowl after being gifted to him after a period of time in the House has passed. Like, in the beginning Jazz is pissed and angry, but as the abuse continues it slowly makes him scared from Prowl? Can you just picture the guilt in Prowl if that were to happen? His lively, energetic and positive Jazz scared of the mech he was supposed to happily bond? And they were happy before... Smokescreen better hurry with the cash. :D
In short, Prowl's brother, Smokescreen decides to try and loosen up his very serious and very quiet brother. What better way than to take him gambling? Not that Prowl's enthusiastic about the idea, but he had promised Smokescreen a night out with him. Plus, what better way to keep him in check and save him from loosing money if Prowl was there with him? Smokescreen will win or loose a couple of credits, Prowl will humor him, the end.
Now see, Prowl was presently 'engaged' (or the cybertronian version of the promise to bond to someone) to Jazz. And as such, they have exchanged their creation certificates (or whatever documents they need to be legal citizens) - it's their version of an "engagement ring".
So, back to the gambling part - Prowl looses sight of Smokescreen for a moment, but it's already too late. Smokescreen had lost quite the sum, along with his apartment. And since both of them had nothing of equal value, Smokey asks Prowl to bet Jazz's certificate so they can win their savings back. Prowl flat out refuses but knows his brother will go to jail, so he reluctantly agrees, calculating the more likely way he could win.
And so he places the bet. And looses to his horror. (he looses due to cheating, or just bad luck, or miscalculation, the point it - he looses)
Jazz is livid. He has no choice. He has to be taken, to be the property of someone else. Neither Prowl nor Smokescreen can come up with the money to buy Jazz back, so in the end Jazz gets sold to a house in Praxus. So Prowl does the only thing he can - applies to be a servant to that House, so he can watch over Jazz (who is still pissed/offended/hurt that Prowl would gamble something so important), while Smokescreen is trying to get the needed money to buy Jazz back.
There is a difference between Prowl's and Jazz's status. Prowl is a servant, an employee, and has legal rights. Jazz doesn't, basically making him a slave or worse.
So yeah, I want Prowl trying to regain Jazz's trust back in him, apologizing and trying the make the whole situation better, trying to protect Jazz from the abuse of the house (and the author can decide what form of abuse they want, be that beating or rape or some other form of hurting -- all up to you), and at the same time hoping Smokescreen gets the needed credits soon (which are a lot) to get Jazz out of there.
Do want:
Courting - Prowl has to start from the very beginning, to regain Jazz's trust and prove to him he still loves him.
Protective Prowl.
Gentle facing between the two, esp on Prowl's part, trying to make it up to Jazz.
Hurt/comfort action.
Guilty Prowl & Smokescreen.
Do not want: Prowl or Jazz dying.
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Count me in as thirding this like whoa with the possibility of filling.
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And because slaves of the house know they have tracking chips implanted in them, when Prowl suggests running away if Jazz's masters won't sell Jazz, Jazz denies the idea for reasons mentioned previously. Also, slave coding forced into slaves that don't behave right away? Not sure if Jazz would behave or not.
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You could always work that into the idea. Prowl justifies everything he does as necessary to protect Jazz but Jazz is creeped out by how different Prowl seems now which could lead to more guilt?
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Hmmm, but when I think about it, you are right in a way; Jazz can be scared of Prowl after being gifted to him after a period of time in the House has passed. Like, in the beginning Jazz is pissed and angry, but as the abuse continues it slowly makes him scared from Prowl? Can you just picture the guilt in Prowl if that were to happen? His lively, energetic and positive Jazz scared of the mech he was supposed to happily bond? And they were happy before... Smokescreen better hurry with the cash. :D
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