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Tiny little TA Fanfic Snippet

Aug 18, 2008 21:50

Title: Along Came a Spider: Au Snippet
Author: Luki_Dimension
Rating: G
Disclaimer: Do Not, Never Have, and probably Never Will own Transformers of any continuity.
Author's Note: Not to be taken too seriously as the plot holes could swallow Kilimanjaro
SummaryTiny little AU snippet that I came up with during my nightshift. What if Elita wasn’t ( Read more... )

optimus prime, rated: g/k, elita-1/blackarachnia, sari sumdac

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luki_dimension August 19 2008, 00:15:40 UTC

Nope. It was just in my head last night and I decided to scribble it down instead of leave it to fester in my hard drive. I've got too much on my plate to pick it up again just now.

seiberwing August 18 2008, 23:23:47 UTC

I really like the concept, but I think it could benefit from a bit more description and development. Maybe set the scene a bit earlier, add in more between the dialogue.

luki_dimension August 19 2008, 00:18:17 UTC

Agreed - though it was written while sleep deprived and I had no intentions of making it any more than a snippet (though really that's no excuse) which meant I didn't put as much effort into detail as I would normally.

seiberwing August 19 2008, 02:47:50 UTC

Well, if you fix it up it'll be pretty awesome.

kapricia August 19 2008, 02:30:46 UTC

OOH interesting! That's a pretty awesome switch-a-roo actually, I'd like to see more. When you get the time you should totally consider making this into a fic. I would read it in a heart beat.

scarlet_carsons August 19 2008, 19:53:45 UTC

YES.

This idea is made of win and awesome.

casora_tigerkin August 23 2008, 20:16:11 UTC

I hope you continue this fic. If you'er not going to you could always post it to the Transformers bunny farm.