Well, you may have been uncertain about the pairing, but you pulled it off brilliantly! I think you really captured Mikaela's voice very well, and you did a great job with Ironhide. Sam and Bee at the end made me laugh! A very enjoyable story, very well written.
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The beginning is great!
Mikaela's all "Waaah! I shot you!"
And Ironhide's all "Bwah?"
And then woohoo! Private lessons! Glee!
Poor Bee! ::snicker!::
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This is perfect! Yes, I'm the said requester ^^;;
I love the interactions and how you build up the tension between 'Hide and Mikeala. And I love poor Bee's reaction, bwhahaha!
I have to say, I wish Ironhide would be my teacher ^^;;
Thank you sooo much! Great job!
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And just... so in character. Fantastic!
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