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mmouse15 September 1 2008, 15:59:38 UTC
Well, you may have been uncertain about the pairing, but you pulled it off brilliantly! I think you really captured Mikaela's voice very well, and you did a great job with Ironhide. Sam and Bee at the end made me laugh! A very enjoyable story, very well written.

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tainry September 1 2008, 19:45:49 UTC
Whooo! ::fans self:: HOT!

The beginning is great!
Mikaela's all "Waaah! I shot you!"
And Ironhide's all "Bwah?"

And then woohoo! Private lessons! Glee!

Poor Bee! ::snicker!::

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spectrumpheonix September 2 2008, 15:48:52 UTC
I'm always unsure with mech/human pairings, but I'm really glad I gave this one a chance, really liked this one! X)

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kurichai September 3 2008, 02:26:42 UTC
I LOVE you!

This is perfect! Yes, I'm the said requester ^^;;

I love the interactions and how you build up the tension between 'Hide and Mikeala. And I love poor Bee's reaction, bwhahaha!

I have to say, I wish Ironhide would be my teacher ^^;;

Thank you sooo much! Great job!

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ouronlyhunter September 4 2008, 23:27:59 UTC
Yay! This was hilarious. Laugh out loud.

And just... so in character. Fantastic!

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