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karanseraph in tf_bunny_farm

Cybertron Science/War Academy bunny

Aug 08, 2009 05:02

This is inspired loosely by various bunnies and fics I've read recently involving pre-war settings and the Cybertron Science and/or War Academy (they usually featured, Starscream, his wing-mates and/or Skyfire ( Read more... )

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ghost_writer August 18 2009, 04:57:24 UTC

Your bunny bit and bit HARD!!

I want to write this, and I will, once I am finished with Crash Into You (which I will shamelessly plug here: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5268840/1/Crash_Into_You .

Read the above and if you like it, I'll take on your bunny. In good Ash style it will be a) G1, b) EPIC, and c) take over my life. :-) All bunnies adopted from here bear dedications to the original bunny inspiration-person in the final version, cross posted every-slaggin'-where.

ghost_writer August 18 2009, 05:00:48 UTC

Whoops - forgot to mention. My key things in writing are attention to detail and military/medical accuracy. I have some *ahem* extensive experience with mil stuff, and can recreate a Army/Navy Academy for you easily. So it's not going to be kiddy type, but serious war-games and pre-war/faction forming type stuff.

Retain affiliations "houses" thingys, yes I have created a sport, I've delineated whose upper and lower "classmen" already (think like looong term Officer Training schools as opposed to kiddie schools.

I see where you are going karanseraph August 18 2009, 23:36:13 UTC

Sounds good. I am happy to have played muse. I can see how one might fear aging down the characters too much, so as to lose a mature audience or just become too silly and juvenile in plot. So, I agree that a setting more alike a university-level military academy than a British boarding school would be quite appropriate to this fandom.

In such a setting there would still be room for characters to struggle with their own inexperience (a bit like the Arialbots are sometimes treated in fanfics as showing youthful recklessness, wide-eyed wonder, reluctance to lead, or slight incompetence, because they were created only years ago, not millions of years ago), but also to be plausibly able to deal with the reality of war, military training and serious or adult concepts.

Any inspiration as to which characters to feature?

In any case, I will wait for Crash Into You to be completed and look forward to this in the future.

crash into you karanseraph August 18 2009, 23:24:29 UTC

I checked out your (shamelessly plugged) fic. It's great. Excellent use of G1 characters; believable tech/weapons/medicine/science; intriguing plot, with escalating conflict.

It would be awesome if you took on this bunny. I would read.