I adore the worldbuilding, especially the setup of the bar, the light paintings and white noise idea, and the posers. And V's internal monologue, that amuses me no end.
I'm having a great deal of fun with Vortex's monologue and his off-the-wall opinions of everything around him. And I admit, I was having mental visions of some of the particularly awful and self-important Mary Sues I've seen in fandom. I've always wanted to sic Vortex on a couple of them and see what happens. XD
His opinions are highly entertaining. And although they're suitably off the wall, everything's internally consistent and very satisfying to read :)
I'm so glad I haven't come across any Mary Sues ('cept the godawful ones I've written in original fiction over the years), but I can understand the desire to throw Vortex at them ;)
Woo, worldbuilding! I love it when people do stuff with, well, Cybertron beyond the few Transfomers we actually meet. And Vortex is a really fun perspective to follow for it, too!
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I adore the worldbuilding, especially the setup of the bar, the light paintings and white noise idea, and the posers. And V's internal monologue, that amuses me no end.
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I'm having a great deal of fun with Vortex's monologue and his off-the-wall opinions of everything around him. And I admit, I was having mental visions of some of the particularly awful and self-important Mary Sues I've seen in fandom. I've always wanted to sic Vortex on a couple of them and see what happens. XD
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I'm so glad I haven't come across any Mary Sues ('cept the godawful ones I've written in original fiction over the years), but I can understand the desire to throw Vortex at them ;)
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