Fic: Transforming Red Alert (G1) - PG

[casusfere]

Title: Through Fire and Flame (28 Red Alerts)
Chapter: Transforming Red Alert
Rating: PG
Warnings: None
Characters: Red Alert, Inferno, Optimus Prime
Universe: G1
Summary: Red Alert gets assigned a new partner. Claimed by rezuri with the prompt “transforming in the sense of personal growth.”

Comments

[shiojisan]

What!? They're over D8 NOOOOO!!!! D;= tis so sad to know that you'll won't be doing anymore, but at least you went out with something interesting, and not only that, but something much longer compared to all your other fics good work ^^ it was really fun reading them. =3

[tainry]

Awwww! Heehee, learning a little mutual respect. <3 Very nice and well done on the series! <3333333

[catraven]

A well done series of shorts on Red Alert. Thanks! I have thoroughly enjoyed these. :D

[dreams_of_all]

Excellent job! I've loved all of these, and this one was one of my favorites! (Sorry I haven't been too good about leaving comments. ^^;)

The characterization was wonderful, and how things change--gorgeous! You really make it feel like a natural, obvious friendship starting to form, but in a totally strange and unexpected way, if that makes any sense at all. Trying to be more clear: you make a friendship that doesn't make much sense seem sensible.

I did notice one little typo: "“Inferno a good mech, Red,” Optimus said calmly." Should that be "Inferno is" or "Inferno's"?

And congratulations on finishing! Thank you for posting. ^_^