I cannot tell you how proud I am of this chapter. It's so good! That usually means a lot coming from me, I think everything I write sucks ass, so this must be pretty decent if even I approve ^^
Title: Cybernetics (chapter 38)
Rating: R-ish NSFW
Pairing: Barricade/OC
Summary: Natalie is stressed. She makes some bad decisions. Barricade is happy to
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Okay, now that I'm done. Woman, that was incredibly le seckz. XD I hope Natalie will let Barricade score properly sometime on the future xD;
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Oh, and don't worry, Barricade will get laid later.
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Mmmm, nice job on the sexual tension. So now he's using human endearments... is this a way of getting what he wants, or has he just deigned to use terms Natalie will understand and not get angry at him for?
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At first he was probably just teasing her, but when it got a reaction (and one he thoroughly enjoyed no less) I'm betting he filed that away in his processors for later use. I mean, come on, there's just something so inherently sexy about Barricade calling you "baby."
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Hearing a low, gravelly voice calling you 'baby'? No, I have no idea how that would be sexy. None at all.
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Yeah, you're right. What was I thinking? ^_~
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Wonderful chapter. Holy smokes, Nat's got 'Cade reving, doesn't she? I like how protective he is under all that gruff 'bad guy' facade. I just really like everything between them.
Yup, this chapter rocks. Great job!
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Thanks! ^_^
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on the other hand, I loved getting to see Natalie backhand someone. I think she needed it - even if it was under the guise of being scared.
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I'm glad you enjoyed it. I found it rather amusing myself.
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