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delilahdraken January 24 2008, 17:31:37 UTC
You know, I definitely love this universe of yours.

The storyline gets just better and better.

I bow before your art.

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pax_athena January 24 2008, 18:49:13 UTC
Wow! I really love the way you write all those guys...

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okami_myrrhibis January 24 2008, 19:54:49 UTC
Woot! Another chapter of win in this series!

Noticed a few typos/language suggestions - would you like them posted here or privately?

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macx_larabee January 25 2008, 05:18:36 UTC
You can post them to me privately :)

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mmouse15 January 24 2008, 20:06:56 UTC
Geez, Mac, you are good! Really fine extension of your universe. I like how the team works as a team to support Sam. Nice story!

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cazcatharsis January 24 2008, 21:02:49 UTC
3 at once, huh? good on sam for his kung fuey brain powers. feel bad for him though... he must be so worried that one of these times he's gonna knock the shit out of them and they WON'T get up.

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macx_larabee January 25 2008, 05:19:27 UTC
Well, that's why he has to train that stuff.... and it was actually Ironhide's fault. He shouldn't have been there. Barricade's orders were for a reason. Not that Ironhide's interested in reason when it comes to a possible threat :P

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cazcatharsis January 25 2008, 12:22:31 UTC
exactly... and i know it bugs the crap out of him that his training could hurt his friends like that...
Hide needs a foot to the ass once in a while, though his paranoia IS understandable. lol

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