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[speechie42]

I made a pact with liona_skycat to post my latest chapter early if she'd post part of "Partners" (or maybe it was "Squishy"...I don't really remember) later today. So, I've kept up my part of the bargain, now it's your turn Sergeant Skycat! I'm sorry, that nick name will never die. I don't even remember where I came up with it.Title: Cybernetics (Chapter 4

Comments

[bat_cheva]

Personally, I'm liking the character development a lot. :)

[speechie42]

Well, then, everyone agrees. Character development it is!

[bat_cheva]

Hurrah! :)

[messy_kisses]

Oh oh oh, I just love your Ratchet and 'Hide! <3 That's not to say there is anything wrong with your Optimus or Natalie, in fact I like Natalie quite a bit, but no one beats Ratchet&'Hide. ^_^

And for your question: more character development, 'cause it's always good. I can be patient and wait for little 'Cade to make his appearance. :3 *hugs her 'Cade toy*

[speechie42]

It's true. Ratchet and Ironhide dominate. Hardcore.

Everyone has been voting for character development, so I guess I'll be going with that.

[capt_kitty]

lmao. I love how Optimus kept questioning her and shes all "WTF!"

[speechie42]

Thanks. Someone else joked that Prime was, "as blunt as a spoon," and I'm inclined to agree.

[capt_kitty]

Lmfao. He is. Ratchet would probably be shaking his head at the pathetic attempt if Ironhide wasnt around. XD

[speechie42]

It's true. Even Ratchet has more tact. Ratchet for crying out loud!

[ravynstoneabbey]

Character development FTW! Also I adore Ratchet and Hide. They are so cute together. :P

(ooh marks! kinky)

[speechie42]

Aren't they? I'm not sure if I want to make it kinky/sexy or sweet and fluffy. What do you think?

[ravynstoneabbey]

kinky plz? But fluffy would be cute too! (wonders now about Megs and OP's marks...)

[speechie42]

I'll have to flip a coin I think. Maybe there will be a little of both.

[okami_myrrhibis]

Character development please! Altho IronRatchet are just too sweet.

Loved Jetfire's 2cents worth - and Ratchet's parting shot LOL

I am looking forward to how you toss 'Cade into the mix. And Natalie is an OC full of win.

[speechie42]

"Suck slag!" is definitely one of my favorite Cybertronian insults. It's seems somehow reminiscent of our "Go fuck yourself!" which just so happens to be my favorite English insult. lol

I'm so happy everyone really seems to like Natalie. I was worried she was too Mary-Sueish but I guess I was wrong!