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Fic

Jul 17, 2009 13:24

Title: Borealis 44/73: Gestalt
Author: tainry
Disclaimer: Not mine, no money.
Rating: PG-13
Characters/Pairing: Protectobots, ensemble, oc's
Warnings: Some swearing, implied slash, redonkulous amount of cute and waff
Summary: Wherein a new combiner team joins the Autobots, and Sam and Mikaela become parents. :D
~3100 words.

( Hot Spot and his team knew they were another cable in the bridge between their species. )

poster: tainry, oc, optimus prime, mikaela banes, prowl, smokescreen, sam witwicky, streetwise, fanfiction 2009 (summer), ratchet, inferno, bumblebee, bluestreak, first aid, rated pg-13, jazz, tracks, groove, hot spot

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sakon76 July 18 2009, 03:40:29 UTC

Much love for the Protectobots. They're all so cute in their own individual newly-decanted ways. ^_^ Somehow First Aid being Bluestreak's kid just makes so much sense, and I especially love Blades' relationship with Prowl... Prowl's arc continues to tug hard on my heartstrings. I do wonder, though, if "a mean-looking muscle car that was aggressively cruising the streets of Detroit" is a reference to TFA and Lockdown? :)

I'm intrigued by the byplay of the witnesses to 'Rio and Streetwise's makeout session... one part of suddenly becoming a sexually reproducing species is figuring out how, or if, incest taboos apply.

I love Sam fanning the paint chips against Ratchet's leg to help pick out a hue. Such a wonderful image! I also love Prowl realizing that you do not argue with a woman giving birth, especially if it's Mikaela. And "Danaela"... perfect. ^_^ It hadn't occurred to me before to view the merge scars as stretch marks... very interesting comparison.

And Sam saves the day from too much touchy-feeliness with his trademark bad puns. ^_^

Eagerly awaiting the next chapter!

tainry July 19 2009, 01:15:57 UTC

<3! They pretty much wrote themselves into the story. And then who the non-Prime "dads" were fell neatly into place, though for just a moment I was going to put Streetwise with Prowl - two seconds later Blades informed me he would work better. ;DDD Plus, Tracks deserves Streetwise. ::laughs self silly::
Heheheh, yep, that's a TFA!Lockdown ref! It may or may not actually be Borealis!verse!Lockdown - he's part of Sentinel's battalion. But he could have jumped ship, (defected to the Con side?) and come to Earth. Haven't decided yet. :D

one part of suddenly becoming a sexually reproducing species is figuring out how, or if, incest taboos apply.
\o/ YES!!!!!! Indeed. They're going to have a little conference about that somewhere (it's partially written, in one of the notebooks, haven't decided which chapter it fits). :DDD

Hahaha, yay Sam!

Thankee! I aims ta please! <333

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