Fic: Co-Dependence 2/?

[macx_larabee]

TITLE: Co-Dependence, part 2
SERIES: Imperfection Deviation
AUTHOR: Macx
RATING: R for violence
DISCLAIMER: None of the characters belong to me, sadly. They are owned by people with a lot more money :)
FEEDBACK: Loved
GRAMMAR BETA: okami_myrrhibis
PLOT BETA: Sapphire, who suffered through random bouts of my madness

They're on their last leg,

Comments

[sakon76]

Sam seems to win every argument he has with Optimus. ^_^ Strong force of personality, that one. Of course, he submits to Autobot and Barricade's wills when and where it's necessary, but it's really nice to see your writing him as such a strong character.

The Constructicons' mindscape is... interesting. Fascinating. And weirdly beautiful.

[macx_larabee]

Well, for one, Prime really can't stop him from doing a scan. Barricade might refuse to take him to the Constructicons, but then again, maybe not.

I see Sam as a strong personality by now. He has gone through a LOT of shit and he's come out stronger. He has his place among them and not just because of Bumblebee. He would submit to a command, he listens to the others, but also makes his point. If Barricade, on top of everyone else, had refused, he wouldn't have been able to go anywhere, do anything.

I gave the Constructicons a lot of thought and tried to make the best out of movie and G1 background (movie background... there being zilch!). I think they work out in my 'verse.

[slvrbld747]

Hi, shivers, scary stuff, damage to the mind. I hope Sam can actually help them instead of just looking to make sure they aren't a danger. I want to mention that I love your universe, and read faithfully. I just read that this is shout out to your favorite authors week, shouts, you definitely are on my favorites list. I wanted to thank you for creativity, and generosity in sharing. -SB