Comments | teyla_bates: Fic: Security (Teyla, Bates gen)

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Fic: Security (Teyla, Bates gen)

Jun 18, 2007 13:04

Title: Security
Author: tigerlady
Fandom: Stargate Atlantis
Characters: Teyla, Bates
Rating: PG
Disclaimer: Not mine, no profit being made from this.
Summary: Teyla says goodbye. Set after Siege III. 600 words.

Notes: Written for raisintorte, whose requests were angsty sex, working together pre siege, sharing a moment (shippy or not). I had hoped to write ( Read more... )

author: shetiger, mini-fest, fanfic, gen: teyla&bates

Comments 16

trobadora June 18 2007, 18:16:54 UTC

Oh, this is gorgeous - what a great moment! I especially love this bit:

She hates that his estimation means anything at all to her. That the opinion of one stubborn, impossible man could weigh on her soul. Yet it does.

It's so very true - if it didn't matter, he'd never have been able to get under her skin like this.

Thank you so much for participating, and I hope the other story decides to co-operate eventually. :-)

shetiger June 18 2007, 18:48:15 UTC

Thank you!

I hope the other story decides to co-operate eventually.

I hope so too! It's half-finished, but I don't think I'll be able to work on it until I'm finished with the Big Bang fic. (OMG must write!)

trobadora June 18 2007, 18:55:44 UTC

*hugs*

Now that the fest is over, there's no rush! Whenever inspiration strikes will be good. :-)

And good luck with the Big Bang fic too!

raisintorte June 18 2007, 19:08:12 UTC

I love this, so very, very much. It's really perfect.

She stares down, sure the touch was an accident, but his fingers spread again, straining for contact. The pad of his index finger is calloused rough like river sand, and it catches on the soft skin of her inner wrist.

That part is just so fantastic.

This is exactly the kind of moment I was hoping for. He's entrusting her with his city, and it's just so perfect.

::loves::

Thank you so much!

shetiger June 18 2007, 19:37:51 UTC

Yay! I'm so glad you like it. *wipes brow*

wojelah June 19 2007, 16:34:49 UTC

This was wonderful - particularly the recognition that Bates's opinion matters so much - and how much she wishes it didn't.

shetiger June 19 2007, 18:58:17 UTC

Thank you! :)

_bettina_ June 19 2007, 19:03:38 UTC

Wonderful, just the scene I can imagine happening between them before Bates left for Earth. Very nice! :-)

shetiger June 19 2007, 23:08:20 UTC

Thank you! :)

ozsaur June 20 2007, 11:55:26 UTC

What a wonderful missing scene. I love that Bates has grown to trust Teyla and that it means so much to her.

shetiger July 31 2007, 19:58:58 UTC

Thank you!