A ride to Love - 1/1 - (Onew x Kibum)
Title: A ride to Love
Paring: Onew/Kibum
Rating: PG
Genre: Romance, humor, AU
Chapter: 1/1
Warnings: -
Disclaimer: Nothing is mine except from the plot.
Beta: kpoppets
Summary: A boy with chocolate brown hair and narrow dark eyes makes Jinki's bus ride to school a little less horrible.
( A ride to Love )
After fifteen minutes the bus is full; jammed wall to wall with stressful, unpleasant people, because all that matters on mornings is to make sure you're in time. People force their way in and out of the bus, mercilessly elbowing whoever happens to be in their way in the progress.
To say the least, the bus ride is not only boring but painful and nasty as well. It's sweaty and awkward, hot and stinky. A few times - a little too often, honestly - a person who would sweat a little more than normal, forget to brush their teeth or use unwashed clothes would take the seat next to Jinki, and Jinki would spend the rest of the ride trying to concentrate on holding his breath. But even without a smelly person beside him the ride is horrible.
Oh the torture that comes with riding the bus u_u. I understand how Jinki feels in this because I go through the same thing when I ride on the bus. It makes me what to stab my eye out with my pencil >_<"
When Jinki was talking to himself, I was like hsjdfhksdhfsk so cute! <3
I felt bad for him though when he thought that he scared Key off with his pro creeperness.
see...creeper o:
LOL ONKEY LOVE
Key, wai you so abusive?
The ending is so cute and fluffy...IDE...*cries tears of joy*
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Jinki, wae so adorable? ♥
I'm glad you liked the fic~
Thanks for reading and commenting ♥
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