new poetry time!!!
we'll its been almost a year since i made anything new/put anything up so heres something i just finished.
it's called "falling", thoughts/opinions/comments appreciated like always :) even if it's negative :(
"falling"
One more thought crosses my mind…
…One more feeling rips through my heart
I don’t know how I’ve ever survived…
…Just one more step and then I’ll fall
I feel the wind breathe through me…
…I see time stand still
I can’t believe the freedom I’m feeling…
…When I fall straight from Hell
Memories of my life…
…Flash before my eyes
I don’t know how I ever survived…
…This lost existence of life
I hold myself close…
…Like the feelings of old
Shutting my eyes tight…
…As I echo to the ground
Copyright BigT Enterprises 2004-05
it's called "falling", thoughts/opinions/comments appreciated like always :) even if it's negative :(
"falling"
One more thought crosses my mind…
…One more feeling rips through my heart
I don’t know how I’ve ever survived…
…Just one more step and then I’ll fall
I feel the wind breathe through me…
…I see time stand still
I can’t believe the freedom I’m feeling…
…When I fall straight from Hell
Memories of my life…
…Flash before my eyes
I don’t know how I ever survived…
…This lost existence of life
I hold myself close…
…Like the feelings of old
Shutting my eyes tight…
…As I echo to the ground
Copyright BigT Enterprises 2004-05