[Private and oh so hackable]

[tetsu_puppy]

Hmmm I think I'm getting better. Maybe....

While the green fish swim
a purple beetle flies close
but neither makes noise

Trying to write this
while giving it a meaning
how does he do it?

A single leaf floats
cut in two in an instant
how easy it looks

The keen eyes follow
while smoke drifts up and away
his gaze doesn't linger

Sometimes I wonder
if I could halt enemies
with a single look

... yeah, these sound better than his.