Fic: Reverseverse Ep3: 'Gay', Part 5 - PG

[test_kard_girl]

Title: Reverseverse Ep 3, part 5
Verse: Reverseverse
Author: Test_kard_girl
Rating: PG, for some sweary language
Characters/Pairings Kurt/Puck, Finn/Rachel, Artie/Tina, most of the regular cast of Glee appear, albeit as their slightly altered role-reversal selves.
Genre: AU
Warning: Puck and Kurt not being themselves
Spoilers: Say through Season 1,

Comments

[mavilous]

So I super love this 'verse (and feel really bad I don't comment on all of it, so I'm going to change that!) and the last two updates have been so, so great! (I'm trying to sound like an adult with this comment instead of just punching my keyboard out of excitement! It's hard!) I love your style and approach to the 'verse - it's seamlessly, spot-on season 1 humorous, but with these great little injections of emotion that keep it grounded.

And I cannot commend you enough for writing all the characters' perspectives - like in the last part with Tina and Mercedes coming to the game. Or the bits with Will and Terri. Things like that. It's not just a Puck/Kurt story, but a glee club one, and it fills the fic out, but what's best about having those moments, is that each character has a distinctive voice, which is just-- I mean, it's pretty great, and I'm totally putting that lightly.

I'm going to shut up soon, I swear, but I just dig your use of words because I'm kind of a freak. 'Smudging the roar of the crowd' in the last one, because who ever uses the word smudge to describe something like that (except it makes perfect fucking sense, damn), and in this one: His mom drops her dishtowel on the table. It slips and falls to the floor. Action as emphasis of what's occurring in the narrative is the best, especially since that scene caught the cottony disconnect between panic and denial and okay I'm just...going to shut up because I'm embarrassing myself.

OKAYLOVETHISVERSESORRYBYE.

;~;!!!

[test_kard_girl]

Long flaily comments are the best comments :)!!!

AND OH GOD YOU JUST MADE ME BLUBBER LIKE A MORON. SERIOUSLY, TEARS ALL OVER MY KEYBOARD.

What a gorgeous comment, thankyou SO much for being so lovely!!! *SQUEEZES YOU TOO TIGHTLY*. All of that stuff you said, it means the world to me. I've never posted a big story like this before for other people to read and I get REALLY nervous about it and it makes me go all squishy and weepy and pathetic and stuff hearing that people are enjoying it :).

YOU. *more hugs, more tears*

xx