I did sneak in another one (well the same one but it was long!).
Yes, poor darlings *Goes to join you in the corner with tissues* Stupid boy.
I love the tiny, little please. I don't know if I can make this better, it's up to Orlando and right now he's refusing to even get out of bed to talk about it :(
(He's not feeling very proud and misses Michael terribly I think... Maybe he just needs some time alone to figure out thing in his little confused mind... I hope so.... Michael I haven't seen for days...)
*sniffles* Wow what amazingly real emotions you got down on the page. Lifes reality is so much harsher than the bubble world Orlando was hoping to live in. Good for Michael for puttng it out there, though I'm incredibly sad for both of them. I can see each side and the unfairness of it all, in my heart I hope loves wins out and they find a way to love each other open and honestly. Very sad but very, very well done. Bravo!
Their decisions are logical, of course...But I just can't accept the state of affairs! It's so sad...*cries* It's not over, is it? Please give your poor readers hope!
No LOL, it's not quite over yet (though we are nearing the end slowly but surely). I will make sure to warn people when the last posts are coming up. But I just can't accept the state of affairs! I know! I'm finding that hard as well!
Ouch. My chest hurts so much! Well, it was bound to happen. FOr them to come to a point where things aren't easy anymore... THe funny thing is, angst whore that I am... I don't know if I want them to go on and suffer in loneliness without each other for a long time, or get back together!
All I ask is please let there be another chapter soon, I need to know what happens to our boys!
THe funny thing is, angst whore that I am... I don't know if I want them to go on and suffer in loneliness without each other for a long time, or get back together! I don't know either!
You're right; it was bound to happen at some point, a dream world can't last forever :(
I will try for a chapter soon, only RL might think differently. As always, thanks for commenting - and I'm glad you continue to read and enjoy.
That little section with the toothbrush just KILLED me. Very very good. Orlando's whole internal monlogue when we first meet that very toothbrush really stuck in my mind, so the end of this chapter was extra poignant *snivvle* Darling, darling Michael. How can an OMC have snuck into my heart in this way??? It's a good thing the person who has hurt him is Orlando Bloom, because if it were anyone else, they'd be getting more than a visious glare right now. But it is Orlando, so I just have to feel upset and sad for both of them. *sigh* And I promise never to raise any more annoying queries about line breaks ever again, because you must be left in peace to write, write, write like the wind, because We Need The Next Bit!!!!
*Nods* let's just feel bad for both of them - though I agree, if anyone else had done this to Michael I would not so easily forgive or be able to see both sides of the story! Good thing it is little, confused, upset Orli.
Yeah, the line breaks *sigh* that did drain me for a little while there... but now I'm back to working on the coming chapters - We DO need the next bit. I need to know how it goes as much as any reader!
BTW - I replied to one of your comments and then not any more, that might have seemed odd - or lazy... But really my internet just stopped working for a while... but now I'm moving on through the list (or as far as I get before it stops yet again... the sodding thing. I can't wait for broadband!
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although I'm not actually smiling now I've read it. Poor Orlando. Poor Michael. *cries*
You're going to make it all better, right? you are, aren't you? please? *goes off to cry in a dark corner*
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Yes, poor darlings *Goes to join you in the corner with tissues* Stupid boy.
I love the tiny, little please. I don't know if I can make this better, it's up to Orlando and right now he's refusing to even get out of bed to talk about it :(
(He's not feeling very proud and misses Michael terribly I think... Maybe he just needs some time alone to figure out thing in his little confused mind... I hope so.... Michael I haven't seen for days...)
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*is jealous*
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Yeah, Orlando had to be shaken out of the little bubble at some point though I wish he had been able to handle reality in a slighly different way :(
Let's hope love wins in the end. Hmmm, That would be nice.
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It's not over, is it? Please give your poor readers hope!
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But I just can't accept the state of affairs!
I know! I'm finding that hard as well!
Thanks a lot for commenting.
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All I ask is please let there be another chapter soon, I need to know what happens to our boys!
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I don't know either!
You're right; it was bound to happen at some point, a dream world can't last forever :(
I will try for a chapter soon, only RL might think differently.
As always, thanks for commenting - and I'm glad you continue to read and enjoy.
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Yeah, the line breaks *sigh* that did drain me for a little while there... but now I'm back to working on the coming chapters - We DO need the next bit. I need to know how it goes as much as any reader!
BTW - I replied to one of your comments and then not any more, that might have seemed odd - or lazy... But really my internet just stopped working for a while... but now I'm moving on through the list (or as far as I get before it stops yet again... the sodding thing. I can't wait for broadband!
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