SCREAMING OH MY GOD I'M GOING TO TRY NOT TO HIT THE COMMENT LIMIT AGAIN BUT I REALLY WANT TO QUOTE THIS WHOLE FIC BECAUSE IT'S SO FUCKING BEAUTIFUL OH MY GOD WHAT DO I DO MIIA WHAT DO I DO SCREECHES AT YOU.
FIRST OF ALL, I am a million bajillion trillion kadrillion bazillion years sorry I didn't comment/fill the spot earlier but god last week was busy as fuck and I could only read your fic in parts ;; lucky for me tho it was already split into parts so GO MIIA GO THANK YOU FOR ORGANIZING FIC SO ANG MAY READ IT ALL NICELY
AHEM HEM anyways on wiTH THE FIC
FIRST OF ALL THE IMAGE OF JAEHWAN'S INSECTS, DANGEROUS AND NOT ALIKE, IS FUCKING FABULOUS
AND IT GIVES ME AN EXCUSE TO USE THIS GIF HELL YEAH. BUT REALLY IMAGINE THEM AT A SUNDAY BRUNCH AND EVERYONE IS MUNCHING ON FOOD EXCEPT TAEKWOON WHO, SANGHYUK NOTICES, IS STARING INTENSELY AT THE BACK OF WONSIK'S SHIRT AND HE'S LIKE BRO R U OKAY IS THIS A SIGN DO YOU NEED NEW CLOTHES AND TAEKWOON JUST SILENTLY POKES WONSIK AND WONSIK IS LIKE FACEFUL OF KIMCHI YESH WOT AND TAEKWOON IS JUST LIKE POKE AND YEAH I MEAN I GUESS FROM THERE WONSIK WOULD KINDA LOOK BACK LIKE WOT WOT DO YOU WO-OH FUC K AND PROCEED TO SCREAM LIKE A GIRL OKAY I'M DONE YEP
"My name is Taekwoon. I'm the serial killer who lives next door. See you tomorrow, hyung. Don't forget!" OH GOD I THINK I MIGHT SCREAM ARE YOU POSSIBLY IMPLYING THAT THEY HAVE READ ANTEROGRADE TOMORROW OR ARE YOU JUST BEING CRUEL I DESPERATELY WANT IT TO BE THE FORMER *SHAKES YOU* MIIA TELL ME IT'S THE FORMER TELL ME TEL LL ME (coughs and you better tell me their reactions to it coughs) (tho actually i can sort of imagine tho like hakyeon being the first to read it and then after the whole floor becomes friends he brings it up over brunch one morning everyone just blankly stares at him and he's like yOU POOR CHILDREN YOU'VE BEEN DEPRIVED OF A GOOD CRY)
Hakyeon violently pounces things and snuggles them, and Wonsik does not. Hakyeon aggressively throws shade and bitch at approximately seventy-five percent of everything he encounters, whilst Wonsik prefers to peacefully co-exist with it. For some odd reason, I find this funny as fuck so I'm just going to put it here as comic relief in my long ass comment you will need it. I think mostly it's because I'm imagining Wonshik and Hakyeon buying stuffed toys for home and like Hakyeon eyeing every one they pass critically and randomly leaping at some of the larger squishier ones with a war cry like I CHALLENGE YOU TO A CUDDLE BATTLE
Basically the rest of the fic was Taekwoon-centered AND I AM VERY SATISFIED. I love how you laid out a whole story behind him with the paintings and being super sooper shy to the point of being viewed as an axe-murderer and... jUST IN GENERAL MAKING HIM SUCH AN AWKWARD LITTLE CUTIE PIE AND AND AND AAAAAND AND FOR DOING THIS: As pitiful quality as they are, Taekwoon gazes at them with a deep wistful sorrow as he leaves them sitting there surrounding Wonsik and turns to retrieve the last item from inside his lair.
All in all though, I'd have to say SangBin is my favorite ESPECIALLY THE COFFEE PART LIKE I DIDN'T REALLY UNDERSTAND HOW HONGBIN STARTED TO FALL IN LOVE WITH SANGHYUK BUT COFFEE And Sanghyuk smiles back as he watches Hongbin finish the cup, oblivious to the fact that Hongbin doesn't even like coffee.
GUH MIIA THIS IS SO BEAUTIFULLLL. YOU NEED TO MAKE SOME KIND OF EPILOGUE SO I CAN SEE SANGBIN ADOPTING THEIR GRUMPY OLD WHITE CAT AND OT6 TAKING TAEKWOON FURNITURE SHOPPING AND AND
I WAILED IN JOY WHEN I SAW THIS COMMENT LIKE LITERALLY I WIGGLED THE WHOLE TIME IT IS SO HUGE AND NICE AND IT MAKES ME SO HAPPY THANK YOU FOR THAT
that gif is PERFECT and so very applicable. i can picture taekwoon finding it amusing to sneak up on people and freak them out because they still panic a bit when he appears out of nowhere as some instinct in their brains goes this is the day i die
i have actually never read Anterograde Tomorrow and i doubt it exists in the AU. i just see that line fuckin everywhere and it perfectly fit so i couldn't resist putting it in lol
for some reason when you were talking about hakyeon and plush toys all i could think of was this idk
"super shy to the point of being viewed as an axe-murderer" literally the best description of fic!taekwoon on the planet half my fic can go home now this is all that matters
sobs quietly yeah i know i really didn't flesh out the hongbin/sanghyuk thing very well and i really wish i'd got a chance to develop them more than like tiny side references but for some reason i couldn't figure out how to fit that all into the already-huge fic ;;; wails. (shush stop tempting me the temptation to write a side-piece is too much already)
FIRST OF ALL, I am a million bajillion trillion kadrillion bazillion years sorry I didn't comment/fill the spot earlier but god last week was busy as fuck and I could only read your fic in parts ;; lucky for me tho it was already split into parts so GO MIIA GO THANK YOU FOR ORGANIZING FIC SO ANG MAY READ IT ALL NICELY
AHEM HEM anyways on wiTH THE FIC
FIRST OF ALL THE IMAGE OF JAEHWAN'S INSECTS, DANGEROUS AND NOT ALIKE, IS FUCKING FABULOUS
AND IT GIVES ME AN EXCUSE TO USE THIS GIF HELL YEAH. BUT REALLY IMAGINE THEM AT A SUNDAY BRUNCH AND EVERYONE IS MUNCHING ON FOOD EXCEPT TAEKWOON WHO, SANGHYUK NOTICES, IS STARING INTENSELY AT THE BACK OF WONSIK'S SHIRT AND HE'S LIKE BRO R U OKAY IS THIS A SIGN DO YOU NEED NEW CLOTHES AND TAEKWOON JUST SILENTLY POKES WONSIK AND WONSIK IS LIKE FACEFUL OF KIMCHI YESH WOT AND TAEKWOON IS JUST LIKE POKE AND YEAH I MEAN I GUESS FROM THERE WONSIK WOULD KINDA LOOK BACK LIKE WOT WOT DO YOU WO-OH FUC K AND PROCEED TO SCREAM LIKE A GIRL OKAY I'M DONE YEP
"My name is Taekwoon. I'm the serial killer who lives next door. See you tomorrow, hyung. Don't forget!"
OH GOD I THINK I MIGHT SCREAM
ARE YOU POSSIBLY IMPLYING THAT THEY HAVE READ ANTEROGRADE TOMORROW OR ARE YOU JUST BEING CRUEL I DESPERATELY WANT IT TO BE THE FORMER *SHAKES YOU* MIIA TELL ME IT'S THE FORMER TELL ME TEL LL ME (coughs and you better tell me their reactions to it coughs) (tho actually i can sort of imagine tho like hakyeon being the first to read it and then after the whole floor becomes friends he brings it up over brunch one morning everyone just blankly stares at him and he's like yOU POOR CHILDREN YOU'VE BEEN DEPRIVED OF A GOOD CRY)
Hakyeon violently pounces things and snuggles them, and Wonsik does not. Hakyeon aggressively throws shade and bitch at approximately seventy-five percent of everything he encounters, whilst Wonsik prefers to peacefully co-exist with it.
For some odd reason, I find this funny as fuck so I'm just going to put it here as comic relief in my long ass comment you will need it.
I think mostly it's because I'm imagining Wonshik and Hakyeon buying stuffed toys for home and like Hakyeon eyeing every one they pass critically and randomly leaping at some of the larger squishier ones with a war cry like I CHALLENGE YOU TO A CUDDLE BATTLE
Basically the rest of the fic was Taekwoon-centered AND I AM VERY SATISFIED. I love how you laid out a whole story behind him with the paintings and being super sooper shy to the point of being viewed as an axe-murderer and... jUST IN GENERAL MAKING HIM SUCH AN AWKWARD LITTLE CUTIE PIE AND AND AND AAAAAND AND FOR DOING THIS:
As pitiful quality as they are, Taekwoon gazes at them with a deep wistful sorrow as he leaves them sitting there surrounding Wonsik and turns to retrieve the last item from inside his lair.
All in all though, I'd have to say SangBin is my favorite ESPECIALLY THE COFFEE PART LIKE I DIDN'T REALLY UNDERSTAND HOW HONGBIN STARTED TO FALL IN LOVE WITH SANGHYUK BUT COFFEE
And Sanghyuk smiles back as he watches Hongbin finish the cup, oblivious to the fact that Hongbin doesn't even like coffee.
GUH MIIA THIS IS SO BEAUTIFULLLL. YOU NEED TO MAKE SOME KIND OF EPILOGUE SO I CAN SEE SANGBIN ADOPTING THEIR GRUMPY OLD WHITE CAT AND OT6 TAKING TAEKWOON FURNITURE SHOPPING AND AND
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that gif is PERFECT and so very applicable. i can picture taekwoon finding it amusing to sneak up on people and freak them out because they still panic a bit when he appears out of nowhere as some instinct in their brains goes this is the day i die
i have actually never read Anterograde Tomorrow and i doubt it exists in the AU. i just see that line fuckin everywhere and it perfectly fit so i couldn't resist putting it in lol
for some reason when you were talking about hakyeon and plush toys all i could think of was this idk
"super shy to the point of being viewed as an axe-murderer" literally the best description of fic!taekwoon on the planet half my fic can go home now this is all that matters
sobs quietly yeah i know i really didn't flesh out the hongbin/sanghyuk thing very well and i really wish i'd got a chance to develop them more than like tiny side references but for some reason i couldn't figure out how to fit that all into the already-huge fic ;;; wails. (shush stop tempting me the temptation to write a side-piece is too much already)
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