Folly, Part NIne

Oct 30, 2014 14:26

Snape’s life has been a series of spectacular errors of judgment, to put it kindly.

This has to have been his worst.

Chapter Summary:  The headmaster can be very persuasive.

“He certainly knew what was right, nor could she fix on any one article of moral duty evidently transgressed, but yet she would have been afraid to answer for his conduct ( Read more... )

neville, harry potter fanfic, folly, severus snape

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Dumbledore evil terri_testing October 31 2014, 17:23:15 UTC
Glad you enjoyed!

Yes, that's a badger--Sev's Hufflepuff characteristics coming to the fore. Neville's virtues do rather inspire emulation.

In fact, I haven't worked out who he contacts first. Nor how he's going to deal with the fact that all his potential allies in the WW will be as dismissive of Muggles as Albus is (as Sev had been before Abby and Miss Platting and and Mr. Jepperson and...)

Nor have I figured out the lengths to which Twinkles is prepared to go to try to make Severus once more "Dumbledore's man through and through." Twinkles doesn't see himself as evil, after all. Just driven by necessity, and knowing better than everyone else what needs to be done. And why wouldn't the bastard thrive in France, out of (Severus's) sight, out of mind? Making quiet provision for the bastard to be reared in discreet seclusion was the way one an honorable person handled this sort of situation, after all. You never saw Colonel Brandon trying to rear Eliza's daughter in his home, or Harriet Smith's father reading her bedtime stories. Albus hasn't proposed anything untoward or inhumane.

As to Sev's approaching Albus--remember, not only did he need to make arrangements for the boy for when the term starts-- he also did not start the interview blessed with anything like the view of Dumbledore you and I now share. He believed the headmaster virtuous, and concerned with the well-being of the vulnerable, and all like that. This was the man Severus had gone to for Lily's protection, and who he'd thought had pledged him to the protection of Lily's child on her death. He trusted him. He'd thought, even, of telling Albus the true story. But fortunately Albus's condescension towards Muggles raised his hackles quickly enough to prevent that....

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Re: Dumbledore evil oryx_leucoryx October 31 2014, 17:55:48 UTC
Hmm. So you are still working out who the ally is? Interesting. Remember that few people in Wizarding Britain are even aware that a Patronus can be used as a messenger, but of course anyone who knew Severus and saw a silvery image speaking with his voice would think this was some neat trick he learned or came up with.

But Severus was expecting the doe. The ally could only be someone Severus felt safe with seeing that image associated with him (however the recipient interprets it).

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Re: Patronus terri_testing November 1 2014, 01:59:17 UTC
That Severus felt safe with seeing that image associated with him....

Or, of course, he was panicked enough not to care. Dumbledore intends to take HIS SON from him and send the child to France to be reared by strangers--is this really the time to worry about who figures out he still has a schoolboy crush on Lily?

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Re: Dumbledore evil oryx_leucoryx October 31 2014, 22:49:07 UTC
OK, whom would Severus call?

Someone who might have insight to the question why Albus is so adamant that Voldemort was going to return.

Someone who has a strong reason not to want Voldemort to return.

Someone Severus feels relatively safe with.

So far Lucius is the top candidate, unless you want to add an original character - perhaps the parent of one of the current Slytherins who might owe Severus something.

It will be a challenge not to repeat entire chunks of Unlikely Allies, because sooner or later Severus will run into the Horcruxes. Of course Lucius might remember the diary.

Hmm, Severus and Lucius destroy the diary, they think they solved the problem, when they hardly scratched the surface.

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Who do you call? Albus-Busters! terri_testing November 1 2014, 02:17:29 UTC
Heh. Lucius is the obvious one, but there's another canon character with equal or more (probably) influence who's liable to be sympathetic. And at least three longer shots that I'm considering.

Right now he's not focussed on Voldemort, however, so that won't be a consideration in who he calls first. His first concern is to put a spanner in Albus's plan to pack Neville off to France and see that Severus forgets about him, in the best interests of the child.

(I didn't notice until I started to write this comment, but here's Albus wanting to pack a child off to people who don't know or want or love him, on the grounds that a)it will be better for the child to be raised as an anonymous nobody, and b)Albus's placement would be the safest place for him should Voldemort return. Hmm--I'd wondered if I'd been keeping Albus consistent with canon, and it looks like I am!)

But no, I don't want to take this in anything at all the same direction as UA.

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Re: Who do you call? Albus-Busters! oryx_leucoryx November 1 2014, 05:58:19 UTC
Liable to be sympathetic - to Severus personally? To the plight of a parent whose connection with their child is being threatened? Sympathetic with the wish to sidestep Albus?

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Re: Who do you call? Albus-Busters! terri_testing November 3 2014, 16:14:26 UTC
Also, he's in a bit of a panic over the immediate problem--that Dumbledore wants to send Neville to France. Once he has that settled, he can worry about the longer-term issues that become glaringly apparent once one is not blinded by Albus-trust.

Really, I'm reminded of Remus in book 6, when Harry is venting his suspicions of Snape: I trust Dumbledore, therefore I trust Snape.

That really is what Twinkles demanded of people, wasn't it?

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Re: Who do you call? Albus-Busters! oryx_leucoryx November 2 2014, 14:36:22 UTC
Albus' connection in France are obviously the Flamels. And Nicolas is maybe the only person alive Albus would accept as his intellectual better. (He would be wrong to underestimate Perenelle.) But the Flamels have a marriage of over 600 years, they must be emotional geniuses. If Severus can get their ears before Albus does he has hope.

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Re: Who do you call? Albus-Busters! jana_ch November 2 2014, 15:32:21 UTC
I also thought of the Flamels, but there's no canon connection between them and Severus. Would a probably-unpublished 26-year-old British potioneer have any sort of "in" with France's greatest alchemist? (I'm convinced Flamel doesn't live in Devon, by the way; he probably stayed there for a few years during World War Two and the Brits have never acknowledged that he left.)

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Re: Who do you call? Albus-Busters! oryx_leucoryx November 2 2014, 18:22:33 UTC
But they still keep their Philosophers' Stone in the British Wizarding Bank?

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Re: Who do you call? Albus-Busters! jana_ch November 2 2014, 19:27:25 UTC
They keep their imitation Philosopher's Stone in the British Wizarding Bank (or put it there when Albus said he wanted to borrow it), and keep the real thing safely in Paris, where they live to this day.

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Re: Who do you call? Albus-Busters! oryx_leucoryx November 3 2014, 00:06:18 UTC
They finally decided to cut ties with Albus when he tried to convince them to give him the Stone. (They had no plans of dying for him, no way.) Alas, this means they have to hide their magical research, but then we know (based on Hermione's investigations) that they haven't published anything recently, maybe since the beginning of the 20th century, so maybe it doesn't matter that much to them.

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Re: Who do you call? Albus-Busters! oryx_leucoryx November 3 2014, 07:24:49 UTC
There aren't many characters with known canon connection to Severus. A handful of DEs, Hogwarts staff. He probably interacts occasionally with some of the business owners and workers in Hogsmeade, some of the Diagon Alley folks. Maybe Horace Slughorn. He is known to some Aurors and other DMLE staff, though not particularly favorably.

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