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Selfish (1/1) | Capture the Flag (1/1)

Oct 29, 2012 21:51

Very happy birthday wishes winging their way to zapf_chancery! Hope these offer some amusement :)

Title: Selfish (1/1)
Pairing: Nathaniel Taylor/Alicia Washington, mentions of Ayani Taylor
Genre: Romance/Angsty Bits
Rated: PG

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character: alicia washington, character: nathaniel taylor, .friday fic challange, pairing: f/m, word count: 1000-4999, rating: pg-13, authors: g-m, pairing::alicia/nathaniel, character: guzman, rating: pg, author: makesometime

Comments 14

inu_midoriko October 30 2012, 02:05:00 UTC

YAY!! Babe these were wonderful and very well thought out! I adored Selfish with all the feels and then all the love! And I adored Capture the Flag for it's concept and the bursts of sexy you manage to put in through just sentences ^___^. These were awesome my love!

makesometime October 30 2012, 20:02:32 UTC

Thank you gorgeous! <3

sky_kiss October 30 2012, 06:08:48 UTC

Still love these, babe. The first one just has all those poignant feelings that suit them so perfectly. I love them like this and you get them to be juuuuuuusssst introspective enough but not overly mushy.

And the second one. Well. That's just some good trolly fun. NATHANIEL TAYLOR. I salute you and your dedication to trolling, good sir.

Amazing job, Zoe.

makesometime October 30 2012, 20:03:14 UTC

<3 Thank you my love

jbn42 October 30 2012, 12:23:12 UTC

Love both of these - Selfish was lovely and sad - and I really liked how mad Wash gets at his presumption that she stays with him because he makes her. Silly, delusional Taylor.

And Capture the Flag just cracked me up.

makesometime October 30 2012, 20:03:42 UTC

Thank you so much! :)

zapf_chancery October 30 2012, 19:00:11 UTC

D'awwww. BUT you have forgotten something in Selfish:

'And then they got it on.'

That''s what happens in those caves, right? :)

And you (and the others, I know you all) and your love of Taylor the troll. I do vaguely feel he's lucky he didn't catch Wash's knee in the groin, especially since she's competing against Jim.

makesometime October 30 2012, 20:04:38 UTC

Ah! Now, you see. That was the intention. But Ney has that messy 'no-smut' disease and that girl isn't fussy about spreading her germs around.

I'm glad you liked, hope you had a great day!

sky_kiss October 31 2012, 05:09:28 UTC

Hey, baby, you know you love my germs. Or...I love you desperately and can't help but...give you my germs? There is no way that doesn't sound ultra creepy. *smooches*

mrs_bree_v_d_k October 30 2012, 19:10:19 UTC

I think you should let yourself be inspired by Capture the flag and write a much, much longer piece about it- as an avid Percy Jackson fan I can´t help but totally love the concept and having them all split up with Wash and Taylor leading the opposing teams and including all the characters would be soooo awesome... I´ll just dream on and hope for the best :D

makesometime October 30 2012, 20:05:18 UTC

Heh, never say never, but I'm working on something pretty long at the moment, so I can't guarantee timeliness. I do like the idea though :)

mrs_bree_v_d_k October 30 2012, 20:51:06 UTC

Ohhh, I´m all excited now, looking forward to whatever you´re working on of course and yeeeeesss, it´s a GREAT idea :D (Wagging my imaginary tail and having huuuuuge puppy dog eyes) !