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Heart of the Dragon

Apr 15, 2012 16:36

Title: Heart of the Dragon
Characters/ Pairing: Wash/Taylor, Jim/Elisabeth, AU!Taylor
Genre: Romance, Friendship
Word Count: 17,702
Rating: R
Spoilers: General for the series and finale.
Summary: Nathaniel watches his Wash die. Yet here she is, standing in front of him, alive if a little disoriented.
A/N: I finally finished it. Yey! Basically, AU Wash is ( Read more... )

character: alicia washington, character: nathaniel taylor, pairing: f/m, author: sky_kiss, rating: r, pairing::alicia/nathaniel, character: others, word count: 10000-19999, pairing::elisabeth/jim, character: elisabeth shannon, character: jim shannon, authors: n-s

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inu_midoriko April 16 2012, 02:00:14 UTC

...CON'T- 2/2

I THINK IT'S SAFE TO SAY THAT THE SMUT WAS MY FAVOURITE PART. (shhhyouaretalkingtosmutneltoo) BECAUSE IT WAS SMUT. AND I DEVOUR SMUT LIKE I DEVOUR FOOD. ....Actually lets never make that comparison ever again. In fact lets pretend I didn't say that.....MOVING ON. THE SMUT WAS FABULOUSLY AWKWARD. AND I SAW THAT TO BEST COMPLIMENT IT BECAUSE THEY'RE NEW TO ONE ANOTHER SO IT'S NOT GOING TO BE PERFECT. THEY'RE STRANGERS, ULTIMATELY, SO IT WOULD ONLY BE REALISTIC THAT THEY HAVE TO WORK A LITTLE AT IT TO BE COMPATIBLE. AND U DID IT PERFECTLY. PERRFECTLY. (yes,yesiwentthereagain)

I LOVED THAT THREE WEEKS WENT BY. TIME LAPSE. T'WAS NEEDED AND U PUT IT AND IT LEFT MUCH TO THE IMAGINATION AND THAT WAS AWESOME. OH YES. 'What could they have done in those three weeks?' "Hmm, lets see. Bond. talk, sex, sex, sex, sex. Oh! and sex.' xD BUT THE PART WITH THE PICTURES! OMG. MY HEART. BECAUSE YOU HAD ONE WITH AYANI AND I SAW IT SO PERFECTLY AND JUST.....T.T.....I MISS HER. AND THEN EVIL WASH HAD SOME PICS AND I D'AWWW AT HER CUZ SHE WANTS TO HAVE BEEN TREATED RIGHT BUT SHES SO VERY CONFUSED AND AND AND GAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH. I WANT TO HUG HER. ...Plan: EMBRACE AND THEN BOOK IT AS FAST AS I DAMN CAN.

I will not lie. I ADORED IT WHEN U HAD HER KISS HIM. BECAUSE YES, IT IS EASIER BUT KISSES ARE NICER. AND SOMETIMES SEXIER. AND THEN HER AND JIM LOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOL I DIED WHEN YOU HAD HIM GO 'ROCKED YOUR WORLD, DID I?' HAHAHAHA OH MAN. HE *WOULD* SAY THAT XD. THE SILLY MAN. THE SILLY WILLY NILLY OF A MAN. But I did so love that she was concerned over the welfare of the gate. Even if it did come off as her sounding like she wanted to keep everyone in. And the bits about some people not deserving second chances made my heart throb for her. SO HARD T.T.

OMG AND THE LAST SCENE. NEY. THE LAST SCENE. I THINK IN ALL HONESTY IT IS MY VERY FAVOURITE BECAUSE THERE IS SO MUCH TO BE SAID IN HIS SILENCE. YES SHE COULD LOVE HIM, IS MORE THAN LIKELY STARTING TO. HE WANTS TO LOVE HER AND PROBABLY WON'T, AT LEAST NOT FOR A LONG TIME, NOT UNTIL SHE ADAPTS AND THE SCALES OF THE ONCE FIERCE DRAGON, SOFTEN TO MAKE A BEAST NOT AS DEADLY, NOT AS DISTRUSTING. And I do think that with time, he could love her. Because he's telling her she could have a third chance at life, love. And if that is true for Wash, it is also true for him. Shall be a difficult road, will be easier for now to just kiss away, but eventually, the kisses won't be enough and they'll have to face their FEEEEEEEEEEEELINGS. MWAHAHAHAHAHAHAH.

But yes. This was brilliant and I love it. So much. Like, you don't even understand right now how much I love this and I don't know WHY I love it so much, I just do. Scratch that, I do know why. Cuz YOU wrote it and you wrote it so fantastically and it was just so perfect and wonderful and GUH. HOT DAMN, WOMAN. MY ENVY OF YOU AND THE OTHER LADIES SKILLS IS RIDICULOUS.

And with that. I love you. *hugs* You did amazing and I'm so happy for you that you finished and I'm so proud of you for making this so wonderful <3.

sky_kiss April 16 2012, 02:31:41 UTC

*deep breath* ALRIGHT. LET'S DO THIS. Oh god. The smut. The horrible, horrible smut that gave me ALL DIFFERENT KINDS OF PACING ISSUES! *glares at smut* It was the devil, Nel. DEVIL.

You might be able to hug her now, lol. Nathaniel has mellowed her out, yo. I don't ever see her being ultra keen on the hugs but you might be able to get away with it.

*pats* Don't worry, they work through their issues and things. That was decided in my head pretty much from the start. Though I suppose if you want you can have them break up in your head.

JIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIMMMMMMMM. I love him. I cannot lie. I love being able to have him in stories. He's just a grand and glorious creature.

*pats again* Don't worry. In the "Ney's Head" edition it takes time for them to fully come to an understanding of the other but Nathaniel really does love her (he's a softy, can't deny it) and she truly does come to love him. And then they have their true love that they've earned and can be all happy together!

HEEEEEEEEE! I love you too, woman. So much. Like, there are no words for it. YOU HAVE STOLEN MY WORDS. *snuggles* You freakin goddess. Thank you so much for your love and support and general awesomeness.

inu_midoriko April 16 2012, 10:25:47 UTC

*andjustthink,ifyouhadlikeasceneortwomore,therewouldhavebeenathirdwaltonsectionofwordsxD* Well, you finished the smut fabulously :). THE DEVIL WAS TAMED. AND YUS OMG I CAN HUG HER! I WONT HAVE TO RUN FOR MY LIFE! I love your head. Cuz in my head, this happened XD. JIM IS A WONDERFUL BEING. OMFG. And OMG I GET TWO PATS! YUS! THIS MEANS I HAVE LOVE! LOLOL Ney's head edition is much like Nel's secret head edition xD.

I HAVE STOLEN WORDS! YUS! BECAUSE I LOVE YOU SO MUCH TOO! :D You're welcome, my queen! Always will have my love and support xD ALWAYS. MWAHAHAHAHAHA!

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