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Fic: "Always" by YamNyletak17

Mar 23, 2012 14:49

Title: Always (3/? --- WIP)
Character/Pairing: Nathaniel Taylor/Alicia Washington, Mira, Jim Shannon, Elisabeth Shannon (some of Carter, Skye, and the Shannon Kids)
Genre: Romance, Family, Angst... Less notably, humor
Rating: T (language)
Spoilers: Season 1, finale
Summary: Nathaniel Taylor's wife is dead... Again. Gone forever, along with his unborn ( Read more... )

author: yamnyletak17, character: carter, authors: t-z, character: alicia washington, character: nathaniel taylor, pairing: f/m, character: skye tate, word count: wip, pairing::alicia/nathaniel, character: elisabeth shannon, character: jim shannon, character: mira

Comments 6

bellakitse March 24 2012, 00:11:43 UTC

3rd post, gave you an author's tag :)

yamnyletak17 March 24 2012, 00:52:02 UTC

Awesome! You have no idea how accomplished I feel!

scarletalpha March 24 2012, 00:37:04 UTC

I mean to say it earlier, but I love that you named her Kensi. And that it was Wash's idea to have her middle name be Ayani. It just works.

Great that he'll still accord Lucas a decent burial.

And Elisabeth's presence at the end watching over them both in a way. Lovely.

yamnyletak17 March 24 2012, 00:56:50 UTC

Thanks... I actually got her name from NCIS: Losa Angeles. I loved the name ever since I started watching that show and thought it fit a BAMF child for some reason.

As for Lucas's burial, I think a parent is going to love their child no matter what they've done... I think the burial is a good way to show Taylor's guilt and love.

Elisabeth's presence... I just think of her as a mama bear, I guess. lol.

mercscilla March 24 2012, 08:26:56 UTC

You really have a way with words - happy and sad moments come hand in hand here, dark to light, and even though the grief is more prominent, it's the little moments in this story that make for it.

I almost expected Lucas to give up but in the end there was no other way. His death was inevitable and though I'm not sad to see him go, my heart breaks for Taylor. You've done an incredible job with his emotions, the pain and hoplessness he feels, and the love for his son that will always be there. :)

The image of two little BAMFinis is the little light of happiness among the sorrow and even though it's heartbreaking, the last part is my favourite. I love Elisabeth for letting him stay, Taylor needs Wash right now more than anything else and Elisabeth knows that better than anyone else.

Another beautiful chapter. ♥

yamnyletak17 March 24 2012, 14:05:12 UTC

Thank you!! I really appreciate it! Kind words make me want to write more!!!! :) <3