Living Room Space: 04 Heart of Armor, Part 1

[terracottabones]

Please, enjoy. ^^

Chapter 4: Heart of Armor

Then you bring me home
’Cause we both know what it's like to be alone

“I can’t believe she’s taking a shower. I would have just gone to bed.”

Al smiled wryly and slid into the plastic seat opposite his brother at Winry’s breakfast table. “And that’s what separates you from civilized company, Brother.”

Comments

[evil_little_dog]

First, quick impressions:

AIEEEE.

I love Ed staring at Winry's kitchen and seeing so much - and Al not noticing at all that there are metal and mechanical bits everywhere, that Ed does see.

I'm a little unclear though - was Ed threatening to leave before Winry got out of the shower (is he aiming for a deathwish?)?

[terracottabones]

Haha. Aieee! I can just picture someone on "Ninja Warriors" screaming that.

Anyway - you know I'm not quite sure why I wrote Ed noticing the mechanical stuff and Al not...now that I think about it, it fits in very well with my grand plan... *mindboggled* This is so weird! I don't know what I'm doing!

Also, Ed was not threatening to leave. He was impatient for Winry to get out of the shower so that he could go to sleep. I should probably fix that at some point...

Thanks so much for the review!

[evil_little_dog]

Also, Ed was not threatening to leave. He was impatient for Winry to get out of the shower so that he could go to sleep.

AHHHH. Yesh, that makes much more sense...I think. *laugh* Considering the last part of this chapter....

[cornerofmadness]

awww the poor brothers. That last paragraph is quite touching