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For Musesinspire: "Bearing time's weight" (Star/Kyle)

Feb 28, 2010 16:20

Title: Bearing time’s weight

Author: rodlox
Beta: sabaceanbabe.

Character/Pairing: Star/Kyle Reese, Kate Brewster, John Connor, Skynet.
Rating: Mature.
Word count: 1494.
Warnings: Chronology protection.
Summary: SkyNet doesn’t lie. Which isn’t a good thing for Star’s heart.

Disclaimer: The Terminator universe belongs to James Cameron.
Author Notes: Written ( Read more... )

pairing: star, movie: t4, *fic, pairing: kyle reese, pairing: john connor, #rodlox, -challenge: valentines 2010, pairing: kate connor, ~het, rating: pg-13

Comments 2

sabaceanbabe March 2 2010, 18:53:31 UTC

I like the twist you have at the end of this, where all the fighting has to keep happening until the time when it can stop, the time after Kyle goes back in time to create John with Sarah. I also like Star. The characterization works well with what we saw of her in the movie and with the relationship she and Kyle had. Good job!

rodlox March 2 2010, 19:08:55 UTC

thank you for your fb. I appreciate it.

I tried to have Star talk as little as possible, as carryover from the film.

>Good job!
thank you kindly.