P.D.A

Jun 05, 2013 19:00

p.d.a
exo/f(x), shinee/f(x) - kai/krystal, taemin/sulli - pg
6301w~
there's this bitter mood of romance in the air and it's unnaturally irritating.
a/n: requested by silentlybelieve, love you and i hope you enjoy this word vomit lol ♥

he's a whiner, jongin, one of those asshole friends that just complains about how much everything sucks and why everything sucks and why it shouldn't suck, and she has to refrain from reminding him that he sucks just as well. )

[ exo ], pairing: kai/krystal, [ shinee ], [ f(x) ], pairing: taemin/sulli, .pg

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onceuponataem June 10 2013, 01:57:59 UTC
OKAY SAFE WARNING AHEAD OF TIME THAT THIS COMMENT WILL BE ABUSE CAPS IN WAYS MAN HAS NEVER ABUSED THE POOR CAPS LOCK KEY EVER. BUT THATS MOSTLY BECAUSE HOW TO EXPLAIN ALL MY INTENSE FEELINGS TO YOU THROUGH LOWER CASE LATERS. LIKE THAT'S COMPELTELY IMPOSSIBLE SO I'LL JUST BE THAT WEIRD KID WHO COMMENTS IN UPPER CASE AND STANDS OUT AS THAT WEIRD KID BUT YEAH OKAY I'LL MOVE ON.

DO YOU KNOW HOW MUCH I LOVE TAELLI/KAISTAL?!? BECAUSE I LOVE IT A WHOLE SHIT LOAD TBH!!! THE BEST OT4 IN EXISTANCE IN MY OPINION LIKE IT WORKS EVERY WAY (JUST ADD IN POOR FIFTH WHEEL SEHUNAH AND IT MAKES IT EVEN BETTER). SO I PRACTICALLY SCREAMED WHEN I SAW THAT YOU WROTE THEM TOGTHER AND LITERALLY AFTER TEASING ME A FEW TIMES ON TWITTER WITH THIS KAISTAL BEING JEALOUS OF TAELLI'S PDA FIC YOU WERE CONJURING UP, I WAS LIKE SO TOTALLY EXCITED FOR THIS. PLUS IT'S CRACK!!! SEEING CRACK KAISTAL IS LIKE SEEING A PIG FLY. IT'S SO RARE AND SO AMAZING AND MIRACULOUS AND BEAUTIFUL AND FUNNY AND IT MAKES ME SO HAPPY.

I ACTUALLY DON'T LAUGH/CRY DURING FICS VERY OFTEN, MOSTLY IT'S LIKE A SMILE OR A FROWN OR SOMETHING BUT I LAUGHED SO MUCH AT TIMES. I THINK THE FUNNIES TWO PARTS WERE LAY NOT BEING ABLE TO TRANSLATE STUFF PROPERLY AND WHEN KRYS SAT WITH KAI/SEHUN/CHANYEOL AT LUNCH MAN THAT CRACKED ME UP. ASIDE FROM THAT THE WHOLE KAI/KRYSTAL CURSING AT EACH OTHER BACK AND FORTH WAS SO ENDEARING, IT WAS ONE OF THOSE FRIENDSHIP TURNS LOVE STORIES BUT LIKE IT WAS REFRESHING, NOT REALLY CLICHE BUT DONE WELL SO THAT WHENEVER THE CRACK HALTED FOR A MOMENT AND THERE WAS SOME SRS JONGIN COMPLIMENTING SOOJUNG OR SOOJUNG REMEMBERING SOMETHING FROM THE PAST, IT HIT MY POOR KOKORO LIKE A SPEAR SOB T__T

THE ENDING WAS PERFECT OMG THE ENTIRE TIME I WAS ROOTING FOR THEM TO GET THE SEXY ON AND THEY FINALLY DID AND OMG IT WAS PERFECT, SO SUMBLIMINAL AND PRETTY AND SOUS-ENTENDU AND ASSUMED SEXINESS BUT LIKE YOU STILL KNOW, AND YEAH SIGH SUCH A PERFECT FIC, I WISH I HAD A FUNNY BONE IN MY BODY AND KNEW HOW TO CRACK A JOKE SO THAT I COULD WRITE SOMETHING AMAZING LIKE THIS TTT___TTT OH AND BTW DESPITE THE FACT THAT I LIKE TAELLI MORE, I KIND OF DIDN'T REALLY NOTICE THEM IN THIS STORY? LIKE THEY WERE THERE, THEY PLAYED A HUGE ROLE I GUESS, BUT THEY WERE STILL VERY BACKGROUND CHARACTERS (SO MUCH SO THAT TAEMIN DIDN'T EVEN SAY A WORD LMAO), BUT THAT MADE THE KAISTAL SO MUCH BETTER SO KUDOS FOR THAT.

wow if you were next to me rn i'd hug the shit outta you bc flawless fics only come from flawless ppl like you ;) but srsly after this, like all the my kaistal feels erupted, and like what is life, how to go on, how to not reread sob ;;__;;



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bollywoodrecord June 10 2013, 18:45:38 UTC
NAOMI OH MY FUCKING GOD



i don't even know how to respond to this flawlessness LIKE WHAT????

EVER SINCE EXO I JUST YES KAISTAL/TAELLI WERE MY NEW ANGST OT4 AND YEAH HOW DID THIS FLUFF COME OUT OF THAT. PLUS YOU'RE LIKE TAELLI OTP CAPTAIN SO I JUST HOW TO DO JUSTICE TO THIS FLAWLESS MAKNAE PAIR I DON'T EVEN KNOW. KAISTAL WILL FOREVER BE MY BITTER SIDE ROMANCE BECAUSE KRYSTAL IS SO ANGSTY ALWAYS AND KAI IS A LITTLE BB THAT DOESN'T KNOW TO FEELINGS.

REAL EMOTIONS /SOBS/ HALF OF THE TIME I WAS WRITING THIS I WAS KIND OF SHAKING MY HEAD AT MY OWN STUPIDITY BC OMG THESE ARE STUPID THINGS I WOULD SAY THAT AREN'T FUNNY BUT I'M REALLYREALLYREALLY HAPPY THAT I ACTUALLY MADE YOU LAUGH. MY FAVE PART WAS WITH SEHUN TBH BC HE'S SUCH AN ASSHOLE AND I JUST CAN'T WITH HIM BC HE'S SO YOUNG AND SHIT AND YEAH KAI/SEHUN/CHANYEOL ARE MY FAVE OT3. THROW IN BITTER KRYSTAL AND IT JUST MAKES IT ALL BETTER. KLASJDFAJDSF ALL THE CLICHE IT WAS SO CHEESY I CRINGE. WHY ARE YOU SO NICE.

KAI GETS SCARED OF WATER BEING THROWN ON HIM AND FIREWORKS SO I IMAGINE THUNDERSTORMS WOULD FREAK THE SHIT OUT OF HIM. ALL THE LITTLE THINGS BECAUSE KRYSTAL HATES PDA AND ALL THINGS ROMANCE GAH I'M SO HAPPY YOU NOTICED THEM. I HAVE NO FUNNY BONE THIS WAS ALL JUST STUPID HUMOR. CKASDJFIAF I'VE NEVER REALLY WRITTEN TAELLI BEFORE BUT THEN AFTER THIS MINOR ATTEMPT I THINK THEY WOULD ACTUALLY BE REALLY FUN??? MAYBE FROM LIKE THEY'RE PERSPECTIVE OF SHIPPING KAISTAL HEHEHEHEHE.

i would also hug the life out of you if you were nice to because you are so nice and i am undeserving of this amazing comment. my naomi feels have erupted lol THANK YOU SO MUCH /showers you in hugs//// ♥♥♥

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