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[tenshii_chan]

A/N: Guys (rei-chan,nini-chan, hada-chan,melodyofmysoul, liyan-chan, ann-chan,anny-chan,ale-irenear,mysweetestlove,luvin_arashi,warawan,mintceres,reituki_fangirl,ruilian-chan,awa-chan,,jaja_emiko,r_matsuno,ate vannie,ohsyojdub,rosesnwine88,clutzynew,, ueda_love1, lis_sho and to all my silent readers out there..),, i found a part time job that will

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[andreja1989]

hiii I was happy to see your post. I said: "Yes, yes, I wanna know what will be happening this time:D" I like this one:) haha didn't ship that sweet happening:) and I'm happy I didn't:) Still thanks for the warning I at least knew what will happen in the next lines >_<

It looks like Sho's plan still did not fail:) I hope it woun't :) Still I'm wondering: there is still the playing with Sho right? Now it's Jun, after him it is only Sho left? If I remember correctly. I'm looking forward for it:D

random: Good luck with your part time job:)

[tenshii_chan]

ahaha.. thanks dear :).. because i have readers who're still minors.. so i thought i needed to atleast put some warnings :) you liked it? yokata~ i was really bracing myself for some scoldings from you guys..

[andreja1989]

haha well some people would be even more eager to read something that was warned :) but it is nice of you to consider them:D

Yeah I liked it:D somehow I'm no good with writing that kind of moments haha so you are like a god that can do this:) haha well the happening was really unexpected but still when she offered him her bathroom I suspected something like this... when she forgot her towel and everything after that just proved my thoughts:) I will not scold you. It's your story, you say what will characters do and say :) so gambate ne~ >_

[tenshii_chan]

haha.. sou sou~ curiosity ne~ hmm, but atleast i warned them:)

hmm, that's because during my highschool days, we're taught to write those kind of scenes,, well in journalism purpose though.., i mean, for the sake of being able to write it..in a more wholesome manner. :0 i'm not good in nc17 scenes.. i mean, i can't tolerate actual terms.. haha!

thank you for liking this story.. i have some bad news, its raining here.. and i'm really not good with rain,.

[andreja1989]

true at least you warned them:D

ooo we don't have that:) haha would be interesting and I would really need that:)

true I like the story... I mean I read around 24 chapters of it in one day, that proves something:) (I don't do that usually) Your story was interesting and I couldn't stop reading:) until haha I saw white stuff in pink color:D would you like to know why? haha the background on your page is blue and I read your story on it and my eyes saw too much blue and I really saw white stuff pink after that, well not long, but still... lol

raining aah something good for insects and not good for you, right? :)

BTW I have started to make that fanvideo we talked about yesterday... hmmm until now it's all great, no problems:D still I'm not in the mood... ugh It was wrong to read your story first now I can't make Sho's fanvideo always picturing that *** moment :) haha It's my fault, not yours:)

[tenshii_chan]

yeah.. actually i was culture shock when i first heard about those stuff.. haha, me and my innocent mind.. tsk. seemed that it was now polluted,, sheeshsss.

haha, that really proves it.. owhhhhhh! i think i get what you mean.. haha! silly dear :) but we do ahve an open mind ne~ so no harm there.. but i wonder why? since you told me to ask why?..

haha.. awww.. sorry about that babe., didn't mean to cloud your mind by suck scenes.. ersshhh, sorry.. but i can't believe you actually pictured it from your mind..

[andreja1989]

haha pollution:) I have been polluted with this kind of things in books:) haha even more detailed so don't worry yours is quite normal:D

haha you ask if I actually pictured it from my mind? haha does that mean I'm a perv? :P you know I can't forget so easy about things I read 5 min ago:) if those things are so nice like yours were then it doesn't leave my mind for quite some time:) so basically it never left my mind until now:)

[tenshii_chan]

haha. same here.. you know those classic love novels? it was actually because of journalism why i get to know those books.. specially sheldon books? you're familiar with him? its very detailed when it comes to love making..

nope.. i din't mean that, perv is different from having a creative mind.. :)haha.. thank goodness i'm the writer,so basically i'd read this chapter more times.. because like you, i can't get my mind off things that i read if its too good..haha.. waaa. really sorry about that though.. i just thought i needed some doze of sho..haha!

[andreja1989]

yeah I know of Sheldon, I think I read one book of his... I still prefer Kathleen E. Woodiwiss and Julie Garwood... both have similar stories as I am in this one that you are reading, so something for you too:) both go into details:) haha

haha creative mind:D sure about some stuff I think more than I say or write:D
No it's okay I don't mind, I'm happy of this doze you gave us. I also needed it. It gave me even some inspiration for my story, not the same, similar... :D I think with not this happy outcome as in your case :) haha will not say more:)

[tenshii_chan]

oh,, i only read one of garwood's work, but yeah,, pretty much the same.. haha, i say, i can write detailed scenes, but the problem is, i don't want to.. its not very comfortable for me..

ohhh!! you pretty much say things about your novel ne~ but will not ask anymore, since i love surprises.. haha! it makes me look forward..

[andreja1989]

haha I think I can understand you... I think I would write detailed scenes if I would write only for myself but, like you said, I would feel uncomfortable... :D and in my case, in my language things don't sound so good as in english... but you know I have my language as basic for my writing... if I don't write it in my language I would not change the story just because it sounds better in english:P

I know I said some things... sometimes it's hard to hold back:D sorry will keep it for myself:D

[tenshii_chan]

yes yes dear..really don't need spoiler, so i'll wait till your next update :)

waa.. my friend just pm me now, asking me why i didn't go much in detail.. er, i can't believe that there are actually those who want to read detailed scenes.. haha. i just LOLed on that message.

[andreja1989]

haha there are people like that :) I wouldn't mind more (I'm used from the books), but I'm satisfied as it is:) better than saying something like this:
"Her towel fell off, he had fire in his eyes knowing what will follow." then end here and started next chapter with: "She woke up... etc." haha yours is great:)

[tenshii_chan]

haha!! but you know i won't! if i were to write, i will write for myself if it involved obscenity. haha! like one of those sayings: for my eyes only.

wow, the phrasing was okay, but like what you said, it didn't have that much effect on me, i mean, its vague right? but well, we need to understand if there are writers like that, they prefer to be on the safe side. :)

[andreja1989]

haha true, I agree with that. :D

the phrases are not enough:D and effect is pooooooor. I used to be like this... I'm trying to change that:) trying to cross the safe side, like you said:)

[tenshii_chan]

i guess it will have an effect with a very consecutive person, but since we're in the century when people are open minded, there's no point being dogmatic..

in the university, i have this genEd class about 'gender and sexuality', and my professor said "its not actually the sexual organs that made it sound wrong, it was actually our minds toppled with our creative thoughts..so its okay to be curious, just make sure you won't cross the wrong levels of curiosity.." and i certainly agree with him/her [he's a bi]. i mean even we admit it or not, we're old enough to address those things as long as we're aware:)