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[weetanya]

Title: Watching Him Watching Her by weetanya (fic journal atama_ga_itai)
Disclaimer: Not mine, just my fandom.
Rating: PG-13
Request: aethrin -- Fuji takes an interest in Sakuno. Ryoma doesn't know what to make of the situation. Fuji/Sakuno subtext. Fuji/Ryoma UST. Fuji/Tezuka implied past or present.
Author's note: Sakuno. Author's warning: Sakuno. Author would like to

Comments

[numisma]

I'll second the o.O over Tezuka's characterisation that Qemqem voiced. Other than that, though, I really liked this.

[weetanya]

Grin. I'd better fix that, ne? If you don't mind giving me an example of a change, I'll add it (after i really wake up in a few hours) & credit you with helping.

Or someone else who reads this & has the same reservation -- please feel free to chime in with aid. I'd love to do away with the o.0. ^^

Thanks for reading this story.

[numisma]

Nnn~ I just see him as so utterly stoic. Not antisocial!stoic (e.g. Ryoma when he's not being a cocky smartass), but more less-expressive!stoic. I wish I knew any suggestions of making him sound more Tezuka-ish, though. Forgive me.

[weetanya]

I've edited Tezuka! Let me know if I should go further, and where. ^^ Thanks!

[numisma]

It looks a lot better now =D