In the Palm of Your Hand Part II for Quelleperedhil!

Mar 31, 2016 22:32

Title: In the Palm of Your Hand Part II
Author: Mathias
Recipient: quelleperedhil
Pairing/Characters: Hirakoba Rin, Zaizen Hikaru, Higa team, Shitenhouji team
Rating: R
Warnings: Sex, bad worldbuilding and magic systems, violence, blood, ambiguous relationships.... and there's a dead body in there and that's a bit gross.
Disclaimer: I don't own anything
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!fic, hirakoba, higa, !r, zaizen, shitenhouji

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quelleperedhil March 31 2016, 15:25:30 UTC
SO TO CONTINUE

The first time, Hirakoba had walked past to hop into his bed, uninterested.

The second time, he'd taken at least a moment to pause and glance before heading dragging Zaizen to his bed.

The third time, Zaizen thought he had it figured out, as Hirakoba fully stopped and looked and considered.

I LOVED THAT ENTIRE SCENE. Zaizen's sort of jealousy and Rin being so pleased by it. Also....just the sheer force of Rin's attraction to short dark haired people continues to make me laugh.

It was weird, how easily back he'd been accepted into Shitenhouji. How relieved his family had been to have him back, even though he'd been gone for so long and had done nothing. Shitenhouji T_T Such a sweet family. Oh hush Z, you dont hate them, youd do just about anything for them.

“He could have waited until I came at least,” Hirakoba said and Zaizen's gazed flicked down to his groin and then back up to his face. Apparently attempted murder and Hirakoba having to kill someone hadn't killed any sort of arousal. Fascinating information. “What a selfish asshole.” RIN. PRIORITIES. REALLY. Zaizen sacrificed his mouse and that's all you can say :v

“Would there be mochi and internet there?” -- REALLY Z. PRIORITIES. They both have terrible priorities.

EVERYTHING ABOUT THE PARASOL. Why Z, no, why, don't.... /sigh. Just do you.

Hirakoba hummed as he considered his answer. And then he spoke again, with such a sudden change in topics that it disarmed Zaizen for a moment. He'd been waiting for the usual attempts at bribery and bartering for affection. “Are you back now? I missed you.” His voice sounded so hopeful and his arms were so deathly tight around him.

There was no questions about what had happened and where he'd been. And somehow he thought that Hirakoba wouldn't ask him about it either, until he wanted to tell him himself.

Zaizen didn't answer; he couldn't answer. And that was enough for Hirakoba to know and his arms tightened around him. Zaizen had no answer for him, except to maybe push his arms off from around him and head down to the water. But he didn't do that, just yet.

And he noticed Hirakoba made no move either to pull away to let him.

MY HAPPY ENDING <3 <3 <3

One last note on the story as a whole. Stockholm syndrome aside, I loved how Zaizen's focus slowly shifted from killing him to freeing him, even in his mind, little string by little string detaching him from captivity. I hope that one day they can make a situation that is free for both of them. :') A place with wifi and water :')

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inappropuri April 6 2016, 06:57:29 UTC
THANK YOU SARA MY LOVE <3

I really hope that one day RinZ can live together on a houseboat or something and escape everything together ;; They deserve their happy ending together.

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