Tough Cookie for Monarchist!

Mar 16, 2016 23:40

Title: Tough Cookie
Author: chouta_angel
Recipient: monarchist
Characters: Hiyoshi Wakashi, Kirihara Akaya, Zaizen Hikaru (mentions of others)
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: Underage drinking
Summary: No one said going to a magical school would be easy.
Notes: I hope you enjoy this, Monarchist! The boys weren’t the most cooperative bunch, only wanting to give snippets. ( Read more... )

!fic, kirihara, hiyoshi, zaizen, !pg-13

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arysthaeniru March 16 2016, 15:32:59 UTC
This was super cute! I loved all the little mentions of their classmates, and how messy and chaotic their room was, but how Zaizen just slowly got used to it. It was a cute fic and the parallels between the beginning and the end were cute too!

I'm really curious about the whole deal with Osamu and Yukimura now, huh. That seems like there's a backstory with lots of merit.

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chouta_angel April 7 2016, 23:18:29 UTC
I'm glad you thought it was cute! And yeah, that backstory....

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quelleperedhil March 16 2016, 16:16:03 UTC
I have no words for how much I loved this. There just isn't enough second gen in the world, and I thank you for bringing us this little slice of heaven. I absolutely love the growth of friendship and the way you touched on important, complex issues among them gracefully.

Fantastic work, anon!

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chouta_angel April 7 2016, 23:19:30 UTC
I'm so glad you and everyone else liked it. This was my first time writing these three so I was nervous about it being OOC.

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feihu March 16 2016, 18:18:58 UTC
This is absolutely adorable! But I'm also dying to know what happened to Yukimura. Well done!

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chouta_angel April 7 2016, 23:20:04 UTC
Me too!

guess this means I need to figure that out...

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monarchist March 16 2016, 18:46:20 UTC
Bless you, anon. This was fantastic. I love how you showed the progression in years and how Zaizen begrudgingly came to kind of deal with Hiyoshi & Kirihara. And the ending mirroring the beginning was incredibly cute. Thank you so much for giving me a little snippet of Mahoutokoro. ♥

(You're going to tell me what happened to Yukimura, right? Right? Please say yes.)

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chouta_angel April 7 2016, 23:22:39 UTC
I'm glad you liked it! I was super nervous about how it and if you liked. I had actually missed a lot of the stuff on Mahoutokoro so it was fun looking it up and learning about it for this fic. I tried to include enough that it'd be recognizable without turning the characters into an OOC mess (though I was still worried about that tbh because this was my first time writing these three).

The mirroring kind of happened accidentally ^^;;

(and apparently I need to figure out what happened to Yukimura because everyone wants to know about that)

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sagely_sea March 18 2016, 14:27:33 UTC
I hope this is the first in a long line of Mahoutokoro fics we get for the Tenipuri boys.

Yours was such a cute 'friendship' story and it was fun to see snippets of their time at the school.

Just like everyone else, I'm definitely curious to know what happened with Osamu and Yukimura. Sequel?

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chouta_angel April 7 2016, 23:23:52 UTC
Maybe? It was fun to write but I haven't had a ton of Tenipuri inspiration lately T_T

And apparently I need to figure out what happened because I'm not sure I even know what happened in that story yet ^^;;

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