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FIC: your journey's been etched onto your skin

Oct 17, 2011 07:53

Title: your journey's been etched onto your skin
Rating: R
Characters: Helen Magnus/Will Zimmerman
Summary: he has spent three years trying to unravel her. She has had him unraveled since before they met
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Re: Dear lord, please forgive me tendre_posion October 17 2011, 02:00:57 UTC

There is nothing rushed about any of this, and they are both hyper-aware of each other (she has not been able to have children in a long time, he had his last blood test two weeks ago). He wants to spend an age mapping out every part of her (she has a smattering of freckles on her right hip, and a birth mark on the inside of the same thigh) and a moment passes where he wonders how many others have spent nights like this. He kisses the birth mark on her thigh and moves up slowly, fingers following the same path as his mouth on the opposite side. His eyes meet hers before sliding two fingers into her slowly, and he feels her clench around them, before closing his lips over her clit. It doesn’t surprise him that she is relatively quiet. Not silent by any means, but gives noises of encouragement and want. She threads a hand into his hair as she comes, his fingers pushing up into her. He spots kisses over her hips, stomach, breasts and shoulders as he works up to her lips.

Neither one of them has said anything the entire time. This is beyond words. They are beyond words. He finds himself flat on his back this time, and does not even have time to think before she has her hand wrapped around him and is sinking herself onto him. Her hand is back over his heart, and they move in tandem. He keeps her steady with a hand at her waist and watches her. He thinks that she has never been more beautiful to him than in this moment. There is nothing to hang over this moment except for how exactly perfect it seems to him. He moves a hand down to her clit and she doesn’t miss a beat. He waits for her before coming, and she gracefully (there is no other way for her) collapses on top of him, pressing kisses along his collarbone, catching her breath.

“I think,” she says to him “that I will need to have another bath”

Re: Dear lord, please forgive me missparker October 17 2011, 02:41:32 UTC

oh see now you've really done it because i'm gonna want you to write porn for me all the time. LOVELY. hot. delightful. unf. thank you.

Re: Dear lord, please forgive me tendre_posion October 17 2011, 02:46:17 UTC

Pretty much the highest praise ever ♥

Re: Dear lord, please forgive me ahkna October 17 2011, 03:31:57 UTC

Yes. I second this.

Re: Dear lord, please forgive me ahkna October 17 2011, 03:39:03 UTC

Ugh. I hate you that you're all "I never do this" and then you do it perfectly.

I love the little touches like Magnus having her hand on his heart, like that's the real point of connection and how they don't talk.

I also like that Will did manage to be a little derpy while watching her get her moisturize on.

Re: Dear lord, please forgive me tendre_posion October 17 2011, 03:42:52 UTC

:D :D ♥♥♥♥

And it's not Will if he's not a little derpy. AND WHO WOULDN'T GET DISTRACTED WATCHING THAT?

Re: Dear lord, please forgive me ahkna October 17 2011, 03:44:41 UTC

Pooe Will. At least he knows he's the derpy one and she's perfect. I like that about him.

Re: Dear lord, please forgive me cata_clysmiic October 17 2011, 03:46:24 UTC

mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm

mmmmmmmhmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm.

Re: Dear lord, please forgive me tendre_posion October 17 2011, 04:08:23 UTC

why do I get the feeling that there is more porn writing in my future?

Re: Dear lord, please forgive me cata_clysmiic October 17 2011, 04:13:30 UTC

well probably because you've been unwittingly inducted into the helen/will inner circle and we shall force you to.

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