Thou Art . . .

[temujin9]

I'm uncertain on Steven Brust's Firefly fanfic, My Own Kind of Freedom. The internal monologues break some of the enjoyment of Firefly: they lose the subtle interactions which showed (without telling) each character's inner conflicts, and turn foreshadowing into punch-telegraphy by revealing too much, too soon. However, the dialog and plotting

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[borghalrantipol]

For ages, I have been looking at your icon and seeing a horrifying face with glaring eyes and a gaping, fanged mouth. The caption made no sense. Just this very moment, I realised that the mouth was in fact a nose and I had been looking at a gorilla the entire time.

Just thought you'd like to know.