Comments | temps_mort: Keyphrase Challenge Fic: Brothers in Arms (Saiyuki)

cosmorific in temps_mort

Keyphrase Challenge Fic: Brothers in Arms (Saiyuki)

Aug 30, 2004 16:43

Title: Brothers in Arms
Fandom: Saiyuki
Pairing: Dokugakuji/Gojyo
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: yaoi, incest
Keyphrase: "I didn't know you could do that."
Time limit: 75 minutes

( Brothers in Arms )

[animanga] saiyuki, author: cosmorific, *type: m/m

Comments 3

no_eden August 30 2004, 17:38:36 UTC

*glee* I heart Shacest in general, and this was soooo well-written! I love the last line, especially. ^_^ It's a very nice ending.

cosmorific August 30 2004, 17:51:14 UTC

Yay Shacest! [/perv]

Thanks for your kind words. I'm glad you liked the story!

psyienna August 31 2004, 09:39:27 UTC

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OMFG, that was hot! I always liked that Saiyuki episode, but I think you just gave me another reason why. I can just imagine Gojyo shouting those words, and the feelings between the two brothers felt so easy and natural.

Also, I'm really impressed at the way you can write a longer passage within the time limit and not have any major "holes", or places where the storytelling seems flawed. It's something I really struggle with for this community, so I can doubly appreciate the good work of others when I see it.

Cookies to you for producing such a yummy lemon!

-Psyienna (who absolutely LOVES tarty fics, like this one!)