Comments | templemarker: YAGKYAS 2011 Enlistment // so vast the field by templemarker [Brad/Nate, Generation Kill, PG]

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YAGKYAS 2011 Enlistment // so vast the field by templemarker [Brad/Nate, Generation Kill, PG]

Sep 26, 2011 14:58

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brad/nate, generation kill, yagkyas, will write for pancakes

Comments 11

mementis September 28 2011, 01:15:16 UTC

I really, truly loved this. :) I liked its structure, I liked the way it made its point, I liked the point it's making. It's not schmoopy, but somehow it works on that level too, which surprised me. Just... lovely :)

templemarker September 28 2011, 04:35:43 UTC

Thanks, dear! I owe you an email, and I mean to get back to you ASAP. <3

iwillrememberu September 28 2011, 07:04:21 UTC

Loved it! Very poetic, yet not too poetic. Very fitting for this paring & these characters.

But they were only themselves, and they shared the stars between them, and it was enough.

Such a pretty image ♥

templemarker October 2 2011, 20:24:45 UTC

Thanks so much!

kubis September 28 2011, 09:24:10 UTC

I liked that. The moment of happiness, between other things and a might-have-been.

Having Brad tucked up against his side was better than anything else had ever been.
It's simple and I love the feeling behind it.

templemarker October 2 2011, 20:25:15 UTC

Thank you very much. :)

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templemarker October 2 2011, 20:25:42 UTC

Thank you so much! So pleased it works for you.

jujubinha October 2 2011, 17:48:41 UTC

This is lovely. I loved how it's Nate thinking about happiness, but the whole tone of it is a little wistful, perhaps. I like how this really shows their character, despite being succinct. You truly have a way with words. *loves*

templemarker October 2 2011, 20:26:08 UTC

Thank you so much! I appreciate the feedback. :)