Dreams With Open Eyes by templemarker [Generation Kill, Brad/Nate, NC17]

Aug 22, 2011 20:51

Dreams With Open Eyes
by templemarker

Notes: This is the first Generation Kill story I've written in a couple of years that didn't owe it's existence to a challenge, and for that I thank
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brad/nate, generation kill, will write for pancakes

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mementis August 23 2011, 04:07:48 UTC
Aww. You know, I've read only a fraction of your fic because I'm just not in a vast majority of your fandoms and I'm always afraid I won't know what's going on, or I'll be missing something, or... whatever. But of everything I've read, I have to tell you: you write these two best. Like...

He couldn't fight Brad's battles for him. That had been a hard lesson to learn, and one he was still in the process of understanding fully.

This. This feels so truthful, I could cry.

And this story was just lovely. Thank you :)

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templemarker August 29 2011, 17:08:50 UTC
Em, you are, like, there are no words. Thank you. I have the most goofy smile on my face. I love, love writing Brad and Nate, but I was really nervous about this story, because it was the first time in several years that I'd sat down to write them without a challenge in mind. It thrills me to know it worked so well for you. <33

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pommederis August 23 2011, 04:32:08 UTC
Lovely. I wish it were longer, but this was poignant and beautiful.

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templemarker August 29 2011, 17:09:01 UTC
Thanks!

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glitterglam13 August 23 2011, 05:06:57 UTC
You write the best Brad and Nate. And this was so intense and heartbreaking and filled with meaning and emotion. Wonderful.

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templemarker August 29 2011, 17:09:21 UTC
Thank you so much! I'm so glad you enjoyed it. :)

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alasse August 23 2011, 05:12:47 UTC
God, this was amazing. Such sharp tension -- just stunning.

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templemarker August 29 2011, 17:09:30 UTC
Thank you!

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pjvilar August 23 2011, 11:53:24 UTC
Gorgeous story, great dynamic between them and I love love loved this:

Brad bucked against the hold Nate had on him,

For all that it says. Beautiful work.

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templemarker August 29 2011, 17:09:56 UTC
Thank you so much! And wow, I didn't even see that in the line until you pointed it out. Thanks for that. :)

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