Fic: Red Petals [5/10]

[temira]

Fic: Red Petals [5/10]
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Disclaimer: Sometimes I think this show was created just for me, but alas, still not mine. Definitely for the best, in this case.
Rating/warnings: NC-17. Sex pollen and sex slaves, dub-con and non-con (though mostly off screen), plus violence, cursing, lots of nudity, and forced druggings.
Pairings: (

Comments

[breila_rose]

I love you. And this and gaaaah! Write more? Please? Haha.

But seriously I get so excited when I see this update, it's so good and thought out and oh it's a mix of all the best things in the world. I really can't wait to see how everything plays out.

[queenitsy]

Glad you liked it! ♥ I hope you'll enjoy the rest, if I ever get it up, lol.

[default_dollie]

I really liked how Kendall was smart and stubborn enough to keep causing himself pain in order to think clearly. That, in of itself, might just be the solution to the antidote. Not the pain, but the chemicals in the brain associated with it.

Will Jo help Kendall get away? I sure hope so. It cracked me up that she freed his masturbation arm. God knows he's going to need it- frequently.

I can't wait for more of this awesome fic! I wonder who we'll see in the next chapter. Will we check in on James? Will it be more of Carlos/Logan/Camille? Or will we stick with Kendall some more? I want to know so badly!!

[queenitsy]

Yessss.... let's totally pretend I'd thought of something that clever. -cough- -edits future chapters- -cough- Haha, glad you're enjoying it, though! Thanks!

[garnetice]

Did I mention before how much I love Jo being a mercenary? I don’t know why, but I can see that SO clearly.

Also, you write a good action scene. Just throwing that out there. you write a good everything, man

Oh my god, Kendall. Why are you such a baby? It just grazed you. O_O ...I'm totally putting this in context of all the tweets you've made about Jo completely not caring that she shot him. True story; I really love Jo in this. It’s hard to get me to feel more than ambivalent about Jo in fic, even though I think she’s a great character on the show. It has something to do with her usually being a useless side character or a plot device. But here she has a legit personality, and she’s tough, and I just reaaaaally like it.

I also liked that whole fight-fuck scene, even though there was no actual fucking. It was very sexy and interesting and I had a hard time looking away from the screen. Which was problematic, seeing that I keep reading these things at work.

[queenitsy]

Writing Jo in this is the MOST fun. She has so much backstory that if I ever wrote a sequel (well, a third fic, 'cause the sequel would have to wrap up some of the loose threads from this mess but ANYWAY) it would be mostly about where she came from and why she likes shooting things so much.

... the fuck-fight scene is my favorite scene in the whole fic. There's something wrong with me. (No duh.)

[poisonivory]

Nnnnnnnnnnnnnnf. Right in the Kendall feels.

*goes to get a mint julep*

[queenitsy]

KENDALL IS JUST WORRIED ABOUT HIS BOYS.