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Fic: first, breathe

Apr 24, 2006 11:21

Author: penknife
Rating: All ages
Summary: A brief look at the beginning, from Temeraire's point of view. Gen. Mild spoilers for the first chapter of Temeraire/His Majesty's Dragon.

( first, breathe )

Comments 42

fairestcat April 24 2006, 15:58:46 UTC

This is very nice. I love seeing this from Temeraire's viewpoint and you've captured his voice very nicely.

penknife April 24 2006, 16:06:54 UTC

Thanks! I'm glad you liked it.

bravecows April 24 2006, 16:28:46 UTC

eeeeeeee! This is lovely! And this

He thought it would be interesting to try, and wondered how the men made the ship go across the sea and why it pleased them to do it.

made me squee: it is so perfectly Temeraire.

penknife April 24 2006, 16:30:59 UTC

Thank you so much!

boniblithe April 24 2006, 17:54:37 UTC

Beautiful!

penknife April 24 2006, 18:23:58 UTC

Thank you!

quivo April 24 2006, 17:59:06 UTC

Beautiful, just beautiful - I especially love the end, and the way Temeraire suddenly awakens to the desire for an identity of his own. The slow buildup fits perfectly, and Temeraire's voice is really well captured. Bravo!

penknife April 24 2006, 18:24:19 UTC

Thanks! I'm glad you liked it.

yahtzee63 April 24 2006, 22:12:32 UTC

I like! Interesting POV inside the shell.

penknife April 24 2006, 22:44:16 UTC

Thank you!