Nature Bingo

Jul 28, 2010 15:49

natureearthstarsskysunWILDCARDrainsnowmoonfog

A/N: For the mini-bingo round at Read more... )

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pestetada August 9 2010, 14:30:52 UTC
They're all very sweet and adorable (mostly).. I love all of them~ :3
I am very convinced with your characterizations~ :D

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tellytubby101 August 10 2010, 06:44:06 UTC
Ooh, thank you very much! Characterization is a tricky business, so it's encouraging to see that I'm hitting it pretty well. ^-^

Thank you for commenting!

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sejitsu August 9 2010, 19:01:35 UTC
Awww~ I love ALL of these! But if I had to pick faves, it would be narrowed down to the last three. I can't even begin to pick one from those, though. All of them were so fantastic!

I really love how you write them. :)

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tellytubby101 August 10 2010, 06:48:38 UTC
*Jaw drops*. Thank you so much! I'm so utterly touched by your words. *Tears up in a way eerily reminiscent of Lee...*

I love how you always seem to review and know the right thing to say! <3

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sejitsu August 10 2010, 14:11:27 UTC
Aww, you're too sweet! <333

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unjaundiced August 9 2010, 19:04:44 UTC
Soooooo great and sweet and deep and very much into Kakashi's head. That last one practically killed me with love. Pakkun's introspection was adorable too. *scribbling madly* Must haz quoteage. Where are all the other reviewers? *pounds fist into hand*

p.s. one small spelling error >> Prompt 1, paragraph 4 [mimicry > mimic] "Kakashi would sometimes make bird calls, and Iruka would try name the creature the older man was trying to mimicry."

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water_bby August 9 2010, 19:44:24 UTC
My favorites are also #9 and #5.

I love the swamp; I love the way that Kakashi's and Iruka's reactions to it just fit (K. just stops trusting all his senses because he so *wants* it to be real while I. just barrels through because he knows it isn't); and I think the name is just inspired! ("Go to the Place of Discovery and Truth -- you're life will be better for it. If you survive.")

Pakkun *is* adorable -- I laughed out loud at his reflection that humans aren't logical as he, himself, runs off to play in the waves.

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tellytubby101 August 10 2010, 06:57:05 UTC
*Snuggles you*. I almost considered expanding Fog into a story in its own right, but I'm pleased at how it dangles. I'm an odd child. I love cliffhangers and obscure semi-set endings. *Siiigh*.

I'm glad you noticed that about Pakkun! Little hypocrite. *Giggle-snort*.

Thank you for reviewing~!

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unjaundiced August 10 2010, 07:18:28 UTC
Hello, Pakkun is a dog and summon no less. Obviously normal rules don't apply to him

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tellytubby101 August 10 2010, 07:09:47 UTC
Fog turned from something small into a monster compared to the other stories.

I fail at keeping things short. *Sigh*.

But I'm ecstatic you enjoyed it though!! Thanks a bajillion for reviewing!

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otherblood August 9 2010, 21:57:20 UTC
So awesome! I really enjoyed these. I can't choose a favorite, but you really fit Kakashi and Iruka into each drabble very well. I think Fog and Sun are my favorites. I enjoy Kakashi discovering his love for Iruka, but I also just adore domestic bliss.

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tellytubby101 August 10 2010, 07:13:44 UTC
Sun has a sweet spot in my heart, simply because it's so domestic. *Awws*. Thank you for telling me your favourites. It's always very interesting to hear people's opinions; for what reason else do reviews exist? Haha.

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