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And Wonder When The Choices Got Made We Don't Remember Making

Feb 17, 2010 23:06

Title: And Wonder When The Choices Got Made We Don't Remember Making
Characters: Charles Widmore, Eloise, Ben.
Rating: PG
Warnings: Spoilers through S5.
Summary: Written for lost_in_108 prompt #21: choices. Charles Widmore reflects on the decisions the island has made that affect his future.

( Charles had thought the island made its decisions for the greater good. He was wrong )

lost: charles widmore, lost: eloise hawking, lost: ben linus

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tellshannon815 February 19 2010, 22:38:04 UTC

Thank you, glad you liked his voice here!

ozmissage February 22 2010, 22:25:55 UTC

I love how you show Charles slowly becoming disenchanted with the island. That last line in particular gave me chills.

tellshannon815 February 23 2010, 00:05:48 UTC

Thank you! I've hardly written Charles so it was interesting to write him here.

flaky_artist February 23 2010, 18:19:31 UTC

Awesome! This is so perfectly Charles, and I love the last two sentences.

tellshannon815 February 26 2010, 22:19:37 UTC

Thank you! I rarely feel sorry for him, but I sort of do here.

jeaniris February 28 2010, 21:55:41 UTC

Great look at Charles and his changing attitude toward the island.

tellshannon815 March 1 2010, 22:52:49 UTC

Thank you! Glad you liked this!