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tellshannon815

Erase and Rewind

Mar 07, 2011 22:13

Title: Erase and Rewind
Characters: Daniel, Theresa.
Pairing: Daniel/Theresa
Rating: PG
Warnings: Spoilers mainly for Jughead.
Summary: Written for lost_in_108 prompt #74: rewind. Theresa sees her life rewinding before her eyes.

( It was almost as if Theresa's life was rewinding before her very eyes )

lost: theresa spencer, lost: daniel faraday

Comments 10

mustaza March 8 2011, 01:59:39 UTC

Oh, Theresa! Nice choice for the prompt, she really fits! I totally love the fics that explore Dan's past, especially his brief history of tragedy with her.

But he was determined that he’d find the way -- loved this line!

tellshannon815 March 9 2011, 23:09:34 UTC

Thank you! I wish we'd seen more of this time period and Daniel's experiments.

pann_cake March 8 2011, 02:22:07 UTC

What a tragic fate Theresa had, the poor girl. :( I like this glimpse into her life after the radiation, it feels so real even though we only know her as a minor character. Nice job! :)

tellshannon815 March 9 2011, 23:18:53 UTC

Thanks! I wish we'd actually got to see this.

irishunicorn03 March 8 2011, 04:05:55 UTC

I love the fact that you take these little known characters and make them come alive with your words. A really wonderful piece.

tellshannon815 March 9 2011, 23:20:46 UTC

Thank you, glad you liked!

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tellshannon815 March 9 2011, 23:23:45 UTC

Thank you!

valhalla37 March 11 2011, 01:40:28 UTC

This is so great! I love the idea of Theresa viewing her life "on rewind" -- and Daniel being in this as well. Really fantastic!

tellshannon815 March 11 2011, 21:44:16 UTC

Thank you! This is how I imagine Theresa did see her life.