OOC: CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM POST

[tellmydad]

How's my driving? How can I improve with Jenny and Donna the Commandramon? Yes, Donna is an original character, but is she consistent, believable, etc? Jenny is taken from just after her death, before she regenerates and steals the space pod.

I have no idea about military procedures and would appreciate pointers in this area.

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