FIC: Shadowing My Dreams 3/5 (Lotrips, Viggo/Orlando, PG)

[telesilla]

Shadowing My Dreams 3/5
Author: padawanhilary and telesilla
Fandom/Pairing: Lotrips, Viggo/Orlando
Rating: PG
Word Count: 1,999
Disclaimer: Not RL; didn't happen. If you think this has anything to do with the real actors involved, then you need to put down the crack pipe.
Summary: Orlando continues to have interesting dreams and Viggo continues to interfere with

Comments

[toooldnotto]

This is so much fun! This paragraph
As tempted as Viggo is to watch Orlando, he can tell from Orlando's shivers that he's already too close to the bed. Plus, it would be rude to watch an intimate, private moment like this, and so he leaves the room, heading reluctantly for the kitchen where he intends to do something about the microwave.
contains so much of why, too, showing things, little details, behaviors and attitudes. It's also telling that Viggo, so very gentlemanly about sex, has no qualms being aggressive with appliances! In a related query, I wonder how far you'll take cliches or whether Viggo has a surprise coming.

[elfin_saltwater]

This is getting rather intriguing. I like Viggo's old fashioned courtesies. I hope he manages to make himself known to Orli soon.

[littlepunkryo]

I really enjoy this story. A lot. A whole lot. I can actually imagine Orlando falling in love the house while Viggo falls in love with him.

[pecos]

What a wonderful ghost story - so wistful and full of longing! You two never cease to amaze and impress me with your heart and talent.

[sarkka]

Hih, I like this slow build-up :)