Pieces.

Oct 21, 2010 18:32



Okay, I found a poem on my harddrive that I completely forgot that I had. I wrote it almost three years ago and had just discovered why I had forgotten about it.

I insanely dislike how it goes together. It's only three stanzas and each stanza is like a puzzle piece, each of which are completely different and don't fit. And it's like I just tried to make them fit and it just didn't work. It doesn't flow.
I came up with the final stanza first and wanted something to go around with it. I played around with it at work and it seemed to be the best I could come up with.

If that's my best, well then . . . fuck me.

Two pieces that remained;

the lie and the forgotten truth

You only left those two pieces

Then you took the lie away far from here

The bell will toll and a tear will follow

distressed and slow

A toll for each silent tear

Where the bell will never cease, painful to my ears

Then you will sit back and listen

to the bittersweet symphony

That is my breaking heart

Leaving me only a puddle in which to wallow

poetry

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