Comments | tehprincessj: Firefly Fic Drabbles

tehprincessj

Firefly Fic Drabbles

Jun 13, 2011 22:13

11 Drabbles, all about 100 words each.
Characters/Pairings: Jayne & River, Kaylee/Inara, Kaylee & Jayne, Inara/Mal, Simon/Jayne, Jayne/Mal, Simon/Mal, Kaylee & Mal, Kaylee/Simon, Zoe & Mal, Simon & River
Rating: T (sensuality and slashy bits)

( He's like a dozen other coarse men she knew growing up, eager to fight, slow to understand. )

slash, 10-drabbles, fandom: firefly, fic

Comments 13

anactoria June 14 2011, 08:03:43 UTC

These are great! :) You get all of the characters so well. I love the first one, and also the different sides of Kaylee that you show--her sweetness and good nature, but also the fact that this life is hard on her. ♥

tehprincessj June 14 2011, 15:52:51 UTC

Thank you! ♥

xenaclone June 14 2011, 17:45:48 UTC

Love the keen observation in the Jayne/Kaylee vignette!

tehprincessj June 15 2011, 16:34:43 UTC

Thanks! <3

lokuro June 14 2011, 20:40:59 UTC

'Undisclosed Desires' is just perfect for Inara&Mal!

Also, "A Sort of Homecoming" drabble was so soft and weird, and wrong and oh so, right at the same time, loved it!
As well as "Fall to Pieces"; Kaylee's endearing in her ability to see the best in people <3

'Everlong' was simply.. hot. Never heard the song, though. (youtube, I'm coming~)

P.S. Are you sure you weren't cheating with the songs? <3 great interpretation of their weird relationships! ♥

tehprincessj June 15 2011, 16:44:16 UTC

P.S. Are you sure you weren't cheating with the songs?
Hee, I'll take that as a compliment, but no. Ack, I didn't think that I even stuck with the themes on a couple of these ('Dead Souls' & 'Ultra Violet' in particular), but if it looks like I ninja'd stuff in there, I'll take it that it isn't glaringly obvious. :)

'Everlong' is my very favorite of all Foo Fighters. And thanks so much, I appreciate the awesome feedback. ♥

dreaminghour June 17 2011, 04:01:18 UTC

Ah, I am so pumped. I want to try this too! but my music is not here... how will i cope? haha, yours are very lovely.

I think my favorite is jayne/simon. you should x-post to the jayne_simon community! (or did you? whoops)

tehprincessj June 17 2011, 14:41:14 UTC

Thank you! ♥ Just... be sure to do it as soon as you have the music means. :)

I'm not a member of that comm yet, but I'll definately have to check that out. Thanks again!

dreaminghour June 20 2011, 18:33:05 UTC

Alright, so it's done :) but I'm wondering... even though I've already gone and done some of this, is it allowed to go back and edit?

tehprincessj June 20 2011, 18:37:23 UTC

I do. I edit typos and sometimes I'll have to fix places where I've used the same word too much. Just try to keep from adding to it (because that's totally cheating XD).

If it's posted at your journal I'll take a look when I have the time.

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