2:22

Apr 24, 2006 20:46


2:22

There could have been a lot of things different. Maybe the mood. Maybe the way the light sifted through the blinds. It could have even been some inane scent that was neither good nor bad. But nothing was different, it never was. The same day that bled to night that bled to day again.

She pulled herself out of bed after having slept the bulk of ( Read more... )

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bellaxmorte April 25 2006, 04:49:20 UTC
Wow! So long!

I started on it, but I must go to bed. It was looking so good, too!

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teevee April 25 2006, 23:10:34 UTC
damn us and our need for sleep! hahaha

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porphyre April 25 2006, 22:52:35 UTC
... that was brilliant.

thank you.

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teevee April 25 2006, 23:10:08 UTC
i take this as high praise

:)

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porphyre April 25 2006, 23:12:41 UTC
I really enjoyed it. There's moments of absolute commiseration in there. I like how you barely explain anything.

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teevee April 25 2006, 23:14:02 UTC
i'm glad that you like that i barely explain things...i was hoping i wasn't being *too* vague!

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bluebells & bluebirds planetcrush June 6 2006, 23:27:09 UTC
i had this saved in my folder...sorry, i just read it now.

i have never met a vampire carrying a balloon & a cupcake! :P wait, is he a savior-like vampire? he gave her an opportunity at life through the realization?

ooh, she dies at 2:22. that is creepily reverberating. :) *shudders*

and now i am hungry for roasted meat & vegetables!

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Re: bluebells & bluebirds teevee June 6 2006, 23:31:59 UTC
he's not a vampire...but some of the vampires i know would do just that.

if they wanted the one who wanted them.

i'm glad you liked it. :)

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